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Looks better! I like the adding of the tree! Good job!

Bob and his battalion of clones marched through the forest. Something had shot them down. A huge weapon obviously in control by the CIS. Commander: What do you think that was Sir? Bob: Most likely it was a magnapulse cannon...but Im not exactly sure. Commander: The Other ships "Can't repel firepower of that magnitude!" Bob: I'd say then "It's a Trap!" for the other ships. Clone45: Sir! Look up ahead! Its a bunker. True enough a small bunker was up ahead...It didn't look Republic. Bob: Let's mark this location, for now we have to regroup with the others in the clearing. Clone3: Yes Sir. Soon enough, the rest of the troops that evacuated met in a huge clearing. There were at least 600 Clones there, and about 2 At Te's that got out with the Gunships. Bob: On the way here, we spotted a small bunker! We have to take it to support our forces All Clones: YES SIR! Bob: Good luck to us then! Let's go. And so, unknowingly who was inside the bunker, the clones marched off. I hope your all still in the bunker, and not elsewhere, or else my post meant nothing. Woe is me! I need a new Flagship

Bob continued his destruction of CIS Outposts on Felucia, when...Bob noticed something over the hill... "Wonder what that is...Wait..." Bob Thought His eyes widdened and all of a sudden Bob ran to the Abandon Ship alarm, he pulled the lever down. Alarm: BEEP BEEP BEEP. ABANDON SHIP ABANDON SHIP! Commander: Sir! What did you do that for? Bob: Get to a gunship Commander! Or a pod! Order all the other Ventators off the planet surface, and back into space. Commander: But sir? Why? Bob: Just do it! Commander: Aye Aye Sir! Bob dashed through the hallways to a nearby escape pod. He got in with three other clones, the commander, and a deck officer. Bob: Commander, did you alert the others? Commander: Yes sir, they are leaving the atmosphere now. Clone1: Sir, Why are we evacuating? Bob: Keep an eye out the viewport as we eject and hold on! Clone2: This should be fun and exciting.... Deck Officer: Hold on, we may be ejecting soon, and it happens fast! Computer Voice: Begining pod ejection in 3,2,1. Have a safe flight. Bob: Here we go! Hold on! BOOM! The pods ejected out of the ship. Bob and the others huddled around the small viewport window...They saw as a large cannon blast was fired in the air, and they saw the entire ship engulfed into flames. The ship's remains started to fall to the forests below. CRASH! The escape pods landed on the forest floor, several minutes later, most of the other pods crashed within the same area. Bob: Commander, did everyone get out safely? Commander: Well I- Deck Officer: No Sir, a quarter of the pods didn't eject intime...We estimate the death toll at 10,000 as half used the pods to get out. All the Gunships made it out however and are landing in a clearing up ahead. Clone3: Whoa...! That was amazing! Bob: Not if you were in the ship when it blew up. Clone3: Yes sir..I understand now. So Bob is now on Felucia...again...His flagship destroyed, and the rest of his fleet in Space. Bob: Im going to need another flagship... I'm going to type like this from now on, as I find it easier...

Thanks! I really should change the title from...title. I must have skipped over it so consider it fixed.

I remember awhile back about a Silver Sea's (I think this is it) That was recently threatened by Pirate Attacks. The Captain gunned the boat (Silver Sea's boats are like 400 feet, and thus can be gunned to an extent) and he hightailed it outta there. Since cruise ships and tankers seem to be the main "Target", and since they can't exactly get out of there to fast (We're talking 1000+ Foot boats..) I'd add possibly small arms weapons or heavy guns, in a safe thats under lock and key, and on the bridge, and thats behind a spooky painting. But...Thats just me.

Very Nice Indeed. I like the red coloring and the backround story behind it all. Nice job!

Read the Topic Description! I decided to make my own website! About Shark Island! Shark Island Website Link It's not Self Advertisement! I swear it!! Anyway, it includes a History, Information, New (Updated when I can), Real Estate if you want to move there, Guestbook, and some pictures (More will be updated as time goes on.) Thats about it...Its a freewebs site because im awfully cheap and so..I invite you to come on down! I made a website, so I wouldnt clutter the Town Forum with all the news..beware on the news though...but ill give you a small hint (MINIFIGURES GONE WILD!) Don't look here if you don't like to see lego minifigures...engaging...in...relations...Anyway, If you read the story, you'll see why it's there. Enjoy, and thanks for looking!

Oh no! I can't believe I died that early on....I blame the lipstick.

Just letting everyone know, I haven't forgoten about this. New pictures will be us soon, as right now I am in the hospital for a family members surgery.

If that Kraken attacked Jack Sparrow, the second movie would have ended way differently. But, I do like the new parrot! And the new pirates are amazing.

Arrr! Where are you people getting these pirate sets!? Great review though, I have to get one of those new soldiers.

Your not the only very lost person here...... Bob looked around. "I suppose they want me to attack now..huh? He asked a clone "Yes Sir." The clone answered "I Swear if I hear one more yes sir...." Bob said "Yes Sir?" The Clone asked. "Arg....Forget it." Bob said. "Just ready the gunships, were sending everyone else back down" "Yes sir. Again?" "Yep. Again." Bob said. The Venator's made their way down to Felucia, destroying any building or structure that wasn't Republic. When all of a sudden: "Sir! Sir!, I have terrible news." A Clone Officer said. "What is it?" Bob asked "Al the Jedi's ship was shot down. He is dead." "Looks like Im going to need a new jedi. Really! Thats awful!" Bob thought one thing, and said the other. Bob looked Grim as the ships continued their rampage.

It stands for My Own Creation. But I don't think this belongs here. However, I may be wrong.

Bob looked out the viewport of his Ventator. He readied himself for further orders from his friend. "Commander, ready the troopers." Bob said. "Yes, Sir" The Commander said. "I have a bad feeling about this...." Bob said.

"Look to the sky everyone!" Bob said. The group looked up and saw at least 20 gunships starting to land. Two gunships had AT TE's with them. "I'd say thats enough for ya..." Bob said.

This is Channel 7, Shark Island News. Comments in () and in red will be by the Mayor. It started out with one table and some one floor small buildings with no roofs or back walls. (It wasnt so bad) Today, our chopper went into the air to get you some of today's buildings. So far, Shark Island has, 1 Cafe Corner/Hotel 1 Green Grocer/ Grocery Store 1 Police and Fire station (saves money to combine them, thus allowing me to purchase my beach hou- allowing me to give to the needy) 1 Underconstruction building 1 Hospital 1 Lighthouse 2 Resturants (Pizzaria and SeaSide Bar n' Grill) 1 Baseball Field 1 Zoo 1 Basketball court, with bleachers 3 houses (Alot of people live in the apartments above the Grocer, and some rent a hotel room) 1 TV Station 1 Strip Bar (Shark Island is close to the USA, what can I say? Agent Trace works there part time.) And anyother building I forgot. (Lazy TV anchor...) Our Current Mayor For Life, Mayor Bob, is seen here with his only cabinet member, Secratary of State, Richard Blummus. (Forgive me, made that up on the spot): (There go our tax dollars at work, buying me a dock.) This is the town going up River Street. A residential street. Our bustiling town center area. There is where River turns into Military Drive (Join the Army!) The base. This is where the tents, vehicles, and training area are. (Its good fun in the training center) Our Two Generals: Frank and Joe. (These guys argue ALL THE TIME! Its hard to get battle plans across the table without one of them aruging at each other... ) This is a Skyscraper, underconstruction. (Underconstruction....hah!) This is the TV Station(Don't forget! Next door, its also the strip bar ) I thought Jedi couldnt love..? ( Heh, this is why I love going to the bar..) Errr..On that note, thats all we have time for! ( Unfortunate...Oh well, its been fun ) Good Bye, and I hope you enjoyed Channel 7's, Look Back In Time ( I enjoyed it. Be sure to tell me when it air's.) Its on now...We're live... (Oh...) Stay tuned for Channel 7's Documentary on the ruins. A special thanks to our sponsors, the Shark Island Government. Don't Change that dial!

I already landed and im at the base.. Bob walked up to the rest of the group: "I got those reinforcements you were asking for." He said. "Awww...its over?" "Yep, looks like it." A clone said. "Well here comes your help."Bob added. Everyone looked up at the sky. Out from space came: 2 Republic Capital Ships 3 Accamator Frigates 50 Gunships 20 ARC 170's 1 Shuttle Transport. "That enough for ya?" Bob asked. "Yes...I do believe it is." Everyone said together. "Now the reinforcements arrive..." A Clone said. A Capital Ship opened fire on the jungle about 5 miles from the base. After that, a huge explosion was seen and heard. "Looks like the clones found the other CIS base." Someone added. "Wonder what happened to Al... "Bob wondered "You Burn, clone, come here." "Yes sir?" The clone know as Burn asked. "Get into that gunship and contact Al, if theres no response then go and look for him". Bob said. "Yes Sir, Right away." "I swear thats all they say..."Bob added. Quite the plot twist on my end...

Oh...I thought I landed nearby you. I guess ill edit it to say over a comlink. misinterpretation I guess. I know I landed nearby the Communications outpost, I just thought that you were at the outpost to...

Hurrah! EB News is still here. Nice Interview. Hah, Sarah Palin...

"Sorry about only one gunship" Bob said to the troops. " I could only take a few troops. There is: One empty gunship One Jedi 2 Commando Units 5 Regular Phase 2 Clones 3 Phase 1 Clones 1 Clone Commander 1 Bob That's all we could spare." Bob read off the list. "We should probably take up defensive positions. If we set up some of the turrets that I brought down, we will have a better chance of ripping up their battle ranks. And establish communications to those survivors!" Bob said. The comlink was brought on. "Are you sure you can't bring down another gunship?" Thok asked over a comlink. "I could send the order in...but most of our ship is fighting in space. All we can do is take up positions." Bob responded. "Alright, you men take up those positions behind there, Sniper Squad, take to...." The commander rambled on about there protective areas. Bob was away from the group, "Yes, send down as many reinforcements as you can." Bob said on a holodisk to the commander in space. "But, you have the best troopers down there." He said. "I know, but just get to it and fast." "Here's hoping that they pass us..." A clone said.

I got this set. But, it was crushed by an AT-AT/ it fell. Anyway, nice review and nice set.

I thought only the Jedi were Generals anyway. I'M not really a Commander either, I have a Jedi Knight and a small squad that I mostly lead into battle. I also command a Ventator Ship which is normal size. I suppose I am a commander then...but not a General. The gunship descended into atmosphere, "I can't see to much, this blasted planet..." The pilot said. "Just guide us in to the best of your capability" Bob responded. "Whats our plan sir?" The clone known as Blast asked. "We need to regroup and protect those survivors that landed. We will provide fighter, gunship, and ground support. These guys have to survive. Do you understand? Bob said "Yes Sir." all the clones responded. "Red Light" The pilot said. The gunship landed a couple of feet away from the communications tower. "Green Light, Go!" said the pilot. "Go Go Go!" a clone said. A clone on the ground said then: "Clones, Identify yourselves immediately!" "We are ground reinforcements from the Republic Attack Ship, Glorious." Bob said to the clones. "Ah, Yes Sir. Welcome to Felucia." A clone responded. "Hope you enjoy your stay" A clone said sarcastically "We'll try" Al the Jedi said.

Thanks for adding a poll. It's awfully foolish of Lego not to open Brickmaster to the rest of the world.

At the beginning several commanders met, then one of them had a flashback to a battle. Then at the end, they go back to that meeting. Very Nicely done!

If only he went with them...Looks great!