Bob

Wow Tom, this is an excellent MOC, and I do believe that you have secured my vote for this contest. There are so many interesting aspects of this MOC, and I like the way you used a monarail as well. Great job Tom!

Sometime tells me we're going to be saying, "Good Bye" to Pvt.Boden...

I was suspicious of him on how the way he acted, however I realized that it must come with the job that he had. I then changed my mind about him. Once again, it appears that the killer is using a knife. How many of us actually have knives? Would those who do like to present their knife?

Kark I believe is a Star Wars swear word. Although, I'm not sure.

I won't be voting for you yet Sarge. I'd like to wait awhile, and see if anymore clues surface. Besides, if we lose the one who's bossing us around, there's a very good chance the scum could take over are create pandemonium with the troops. I just thought the way you were acting earlier was a little...suspicious.

I see that one of those posters from the Lego 10 Years of Star Wars have made it on Ebay. I was wondering how long it would take.

Going on the defensive Sarge? Alittle hot under that helmet of yours? I think we should investigate you further, and also, I was asleep last night, in my own bed. Unfortunatly, I don't have anyone to back up my story. However, where were you last night? Killing poor Zariah? You two seemed to be having a dispute yesterday. Yes, I can fight in my full combat gear. I was just mentioning how much I really don't like them. Regardless, perhaps we should get them on.

I'm growing more and more suspicious of you by the minute Sarge. First, you refuse to show us your face, and take off your helmet. Second, you want us to keep our helmets on? That's a horrible idea, because it's hard enough to see out of these things and walk around, however it's even harder to fend off a killer.

We have a limited supply of clues, and no leads. I wonder though, what is under your helmet Sarge? Why is it always on you? All of us have our helmets off, and you are the only one with a helmet on! That seems suspicious.

Like I said earlier, perhaps we should search the grounds for anything like a knife or clues. Split into groups of 2 or 3?

Oh No! A good friend, and one that I trusted. Now, this raises some questions, Why was Zahiah out after dark? Not much is known, except that it may be the same person. They both have knives, and if all Rebel Scum had knives, this battle would have been over. It sucks that Zahiah was killed like this, she would have wanted to die fighting off hoards of rebels.

I wish there was an "Other" choice, however, I picked Star Wars as I really enjoy the movies. However if city theme was up there, it would be a different story.

Perfect Oky. By the Way, I won't be able to do my own voice.

As do I. Something tells me I'm going to die on Night 1 again, mostly because I'm the only one with suggestions.

Bob and the clones onboard the Venator's traveled through lightspeed. Jifel and Tee-Bee we're in another ship, and the four ships we're maintaining radio silence so they could possibly surprise the CIS. "No chance though, they probably know we're coming." Bob said to himself "Leaving lightspeed now sir!" an engineer said. The ship jerked out of lightspeed, and ran straight into a large battle. A Venator was begining it's decent onto Raxus Prime, while the droid forces were zooming around. Luckily, the droids did not know they we're coming. "Launch all fighters! Ready the guns, and raise the shields once those ships get out" Bob said. "Yes sir!" the ships captain said. An alarm sounded, sending all fighters to their stations. They knocked out one CIS Frigate, but the others were holding strong. "Captain! Move the ships closer to the planet to provide cover for our gunships and walker dropships." "Yes sir!" the captain who's name was Pulis said. Bob and his captain got into a shuttle, they took off with the other 20 or 30 gunships from their Venator, and regrouped with the others. A few walker dropships followed behind.

I hope I don't die on Night 1 again...

Done, and done. I guess we all got medals then...

Bob crawled through the sewage system. The workers at the plant were more than happy to let them go by without an argument and here he was, crawling, sludge and waste products all over the tunnel. Finally, they saw light at the end of the tunnel, and exited near by the MTT Parking area. Two large control towers for the spaceport, refitted to house a Separatist command post were right over the MTT's looming. The AAT's weren't far away. "All in range for the blast." Bob said. "Fan out and go plant the charges. Do not get caught, or else the entire mission will be lost. In the event that you do get caught, detonate immediately." "Yes sir Commander." another clone said. The team split up, sneaking under MTT's and near by buildings placing the bombs. Bob set out for a different objective. He went to go look for the King. Running through the roads, barely avoiding the droid patrols, he made it to the palace, partially taken over by the CIS. He assumed the king would be clone by, either in a camp or inside a building in the palace. He entered through an air duct, and crawled until he made it to the palace's rooms. He noted the door guarded by two battle droids, and went over there. "Halt." a battle droid said. "I have an important message for the King." Bob said. "You..can not go in there, it is not allowed" the other said. "Roger, roger." the first stated. "Very well then." Bob said. He started to turn around, before revealing a silenced blaster pistol. He shot both droids, opened the door, and carried the droid parts inside. He instantly met the king, who was delighted to see him. "Thank the god's that you are here! Are you here to liberate our people?" he asked Bob. "Yes your highness, we are going to blow up the part of the spaceport where the droid tanks are. I am just warning you now." Bob said. "It is okay. Those buildings were scheduled for removal anyway." the King said. "I will have to go now, I will see you very soon." Bob said. Bob exited the palace and returned to the sewage area fast. His troops were inside the tunnel ready to go. He followed them all the way back to the plant, then back to the plateau, where he now held the detonation device. He checked to see if all the gunners were in position, the ground troopers were ready to storm the city, and to see if the tank's guns were working. Once all that was done, he pressed "Detonate". All of the tanks were instantly destroyed, and the AT-RT's and ground troopers stormed the capital. Within a two hours, the battle was won. He met the King in the city square, where Bob was given a medal. Then, four Republic Assault Ships left lightspeed. His troops were loaded on board, and they took off. Bob went up to the bridge. "Thanks for the rescue Captain." He said to the ships captain. "No problem, sir." he replied. "Where are we headed now?" Bob's Captain walked on the bridge. "Raxus Prime" he said. "Jim and Oky want us there now. General Grevious was spotted there." "Well, lets go then, engage lightspeed." Bob said. "Yes Commander, right away." the captain said.

I'll try to copy Episode 14 of the Clone Wars, and liberate the city. Then the will Republic Reinforcements come with your message, and the clones and I will get over to Raxus Prime as fast as possible.

I left to Nexus Oxus alone...I haven't the slightest idea as to where Jifel and Tee-Bee are. Ill say what I did since I left Coruscant, went to Nexus Oxus alone, went down to recon the planet and saw nothing. Then I went back into my Venator and that fell under attack by the Seperatists, we were shot down and spent the night in a valley on the surface. The next day the droids attacked Nexus Oxus and it was taken and currently Bob is setting a trap for the droids by sneaking into the city to plant charges.

Reading these always brings a smile to my face. I like the different sides and the landscapes where they are featured. I also liked that surprise at the end.

Bob smiled under his helmet at what he had done. It had taken a few hours to do it, but everything was now going according to plan. The AT TE had to go all the way back to the beginning of the canyon to get to a rock ramp that took it to the top of the plateau, and one or two troopers cables snapped, but it had been successful so far. Now he ran across the desert on the outskirts of the city. With him were about 4 troops, his Captain had stayed behind to supervise. The droid landers had since then taken off, which was a scare to the troops, as they wondered if the droids would see them, however they did not. Bob and the clones stopped behind a small rock formation. "How many tanks do you think those droids have?" a clone asked "Based off of our recon reports, they have 5 MTT's, and 10 AAT's along with about 2000 Droids." Bob said. "So, what is our plan again?" another clone asked. "We are going to infiltrate the city, plant charges, and then when they go off, our clones on the plateau will open fire on the remaining droids. Our AT-RT's and one AT-TE will take out any remaining tanks or cannons." Bob replied. "So, how are we going to get into the city?" the clone asked. "Here's how we're going to do it..." Bob started to say. "What? You just said, "This is how we're going to do it" and then stopped." A third clone said. "I was pausing for dramatic effect; we're going to enter through the sewage systems." Bob said while pointing at a small waste treatment center about a quarter mile out of town. "We're going in through that."

Bob and his remaining troops exited the canyon. What they saw on the outside wasn't a good sight. Seperatist Landers were landing outside of the capital city, and MTT's and ATT's were converging on the large city. "That's an invasion army!" A clone exclaimed. "Yes, we currently stand no chance against them, so we will have to use our minds. Something those droids don't have." Bob said. "Agreed, but how?" Bob's Captain said. "Here is what we'll do..." Bob started to say.

Pretty much. You didn't miss much except for a dead traitor officer and alot of yelling over accents.

You have inspired me. That's a great MOC and a funny story to go with it.