There i have now changed the windows in the front carriage to smaller windows as well and added a black connecting ring on the back of the carriages to create the illusion of them being closer together
Although i will be able to adjust the closeness just by moving the bogies further back in the model as well just don't want them to be to close as then they could touch and cause a derail when going around a corner XD
Let me know what you all think to the updates i have made to my MOC thanks
Ben