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The tower looks great! Nice work on the telescope as well!

I love the river! How it's hollow, and such.

I love the snowy terrain, and the details on the fort are nice too!

Er, how does one earn titles? Challenges, i'm guessing?

Ok. Gotcha...

I love the detailing on the castle walls! There's so much going on, with carpenters, to battle planning, and so much more! This build is awe inspiring!

Hey @ de Gothia, where is your character based in Avalonia?

No offence taken. Thanks for the advice. In my future builds, i'll link to previous builds in the story. Perhaps you could give me some advice on how to make my story easier to follow?

If you go back, and follow my earlier builds, you should be able to follow the story better.

Why was Captain BeerBeard banned?

I love the builds and the story!

Ok, thanks :)

(Ok, before you guys say anything, this build was ONLY created for story reasons. It was not built to show off cool details or anything. So i'd appreciate it if you guys could just comment on the story aspects. Thanks :) "Commander Avdar," Aeldric said, giving his ranger commander a slight bow of the head. "Yes?" he asked. "Well, while Voraal and i were on our patrol, we found an abandoned house. And inside it, was a hole in the flooring, of which led down to a large tomb." "And?" "Well, a large coffin sat in the middle of the room. Upon it, was engraved the name: Dar Askelohn." Aeldric said, with his hands behind his back in a respect position. "So? What does this ancient scholar have to do with your duties?" Avdar inquired. "I was wondering, for our patrol tomorrow, if Voraal and i could investigate further." Aeldric said. Avdar's face was filled with disgust. "No. You must not stray from your duties. If you ask anymore, i will remove your rank." Avdar said, dismissing Aeldric with a gesture. Aeldric stepped outside, where Voraal was waiting. "Well, are we still going to look for the elves?" he asked. Aeldric looked back at the closed door. "Yes, we are."

Just a question: Am i constricted to building within Avalonia? I was planning for Aeldric and Voraal's story to eventually take them up to Mitgardia, but i'm not sure if i'm allowed to build there. It would only be for story reasons, of course.

Any plans for a Book III?

Previous Chapter: The Forests Beyond Vanhorn --- Next Chapter: Avdar's Office (Remake) The room was dark, besides the small hole in which Aeldric jumped down. A beam of sunlight shown down into the room, revealing many rows of sarcophagi. The one thing that stood out to him and Voraal was the large coffin. Behind it was a small statue of an elderly man. A plaque rested in front of the casket, and said: Here lies the founder of the Avantari, Dar Askelohn "Who's that?" Voraal asked Aeldric patiently. Aeldric rested his chin on his fist. "Dar Askelohn was an ancient scholar of the mythic elf tribes near Vanhorn. They were only myth, for they were rarely seen, but Dar said he knew them well." Aeldric finished. "He was a close friend to my grandfather, and mysteriously disappeared one day." he said. "Maybe we can try to find one of these tribes?" Voraal asked. "Well, perhaps. But only on our next patrol. It's getting late." Aeldric said, looking up through the hole in the flooring, and at the rising moon. ------------------------------------------------ Alright, so this build is what mainly kicks off what will be Aeldric and Voraal's main story. Next build will depict them out, searching for one of these mythical elf tribes. Until then, let me know what you guys think! If you have any ideas, please share them! More Pics Below! Now, i won't be going for large builds until i can get my hands on a decent sized bricklink order, also, don't have the largest LEGO collection, so, excuse me if that's what you expect. ;) Edit: I know the build isn't large, but here, i mainly wanted to try out a coffin technique.

Truly magnificent Ecc! I love everything about this build! The inhabitants kinda remind me of white-walkers.

I love the texturing on the walls! The rockwork is nice too!

Well, ok. But is there any way of knowing which planets are beside which? Like, a code or something?

Gotta love those walls!

Oops, repeated post.

Well, alright. But i'm in Avalonia now, it's too late.

it's some Norton, uncategorized website thing. Not entirely sure,

I'm not sure,

I'm conflicted. I like Mitgardia's architecture more than Avalonia's, but i don't have many white pieces to use for snow.