korpen4444 Posted January 4, 2014 Posted January 4, 2014 Hi! A small build here showing of the rebel control rooms demolished. Please ignore the sandy background. Me: Lord Vader, all enemy data has been recovered, and the terminals have been destroyed. Vader: Good work, sergeant. With these secrets, we shall soon crush them. Me: Yes sir. An overhead look at the destroyed data terminals, and the flames. They should get out of there. C&C welcome. It may be small, but I hope you enjoy! Quote
BEAVeR Posted January 6, 2014 Posted January 6, 2014 Hi, glad to see another Imperial entry! The way you made those flames, smoke and explosions is really original! Too bad some of those pieces don't exist in those colors... I have some additional suggestions that won't take up much time. Try placing those terminals on a stand, insted of just placing them on the ground. Instead of making the walls two studs thick, consider only one stud. The heaviness of the walls distracts me a bit of the scene itself. Also, try closing the portal is standing in, by putting something like an arch brick above it. Put some texture in the walls. This can be easily done with some pallisade bricks, SNOT pieces... anything you can think of. you can keep those different colors: I really like that variation. Hope that helps you to visualize your story as you want it to. You've made a good start. Quote
MstrOfPppts Posted January 6, 2014 Posted January 6, 2014 Everything BEAVeR suggested stands and I'd also add that even if building in LDD it's nice that the MOC is more open. Skip one or two walls ta give it more air and so that things are better seen from more perspectives. Also building the walls at least a bit higher than the height of the minifigs gives a more complete feeling ... Quote
korpen4444 Posted January 6, 2014 Author Posted January 6, 2014 Thanks for the comments! Updates are on the way! Quote
Lego Spy Posted January 15, 2014 Posted January 15, 2014 Thanks for the comments! Updates are on the way! Updates? Time's almost up... Quote
korpen4444 Posted January 18, 2014 Author Posted January 18, 2014 Updates? Time's almost up... Sorry but I couldn't finish in time . A lot of stuff came up. Quote
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