Bkrosell Posted August 6, 2013 Posted August 6, 2013 ( I would like these to be judged ) laser cannon, used on the larger imperial ships, Proton cannon, used on the smaller ships like tie fighters, Control center for the cannons,this is much closer to the ground cannons then the rebel base, Quote
Nom Carver Posted August 6, 2013 Posted August 6, 2013 I like the little command centre, you could try to integrate those little builds into one single layout. Quote
Tariq j Posted August 6, 2013 Posted August 6, 2013 Nice build, as Nom Carver said merging it into one build would be good. Quote
Captain Settle Posted August 6, 2013 Posted August 6, 2013 Cute little command centre, but I agree these would look better in layout. Quote
Brickdoctor Posted August 6, 2013 Posted August 6, 2013 Good start. I would like to see more storyline involved in this, and combined into one bigger diorama, as has been said. Maybe a little more solidified color scheme too: yellow trim on grey is good, red highlights on grey is good, but the yellow and red together look very CW-ish, and I would pick one or the other to be used sparingly with more greys. Quote
ablake90 Posted August 6, 2013 Posted August 6, 2013 I had the exact same kind of command centre in mind but for a landing pad Quote
Bkrosell Posted August 6, 2013 Author Posted August 6, 2013 Good start. I would like to see more storyline involved in this, and combined into one bigger diorama, as has been said. Maybe a little more solidified color scheme too: yellow trim on grey is good, red highlights on grey is good, but the yellow and red together look very CW-ish, and I would pick one or the other to be used sparingly with more greys. I would also like to have put it in a lay out but the base plate I needed for that is being used for another free build I am working on, and with the color scheme, I have a limited amount of bricks in certain colors so I try to make some sort of pattern to make it look better and I agree the cannons look like something from CW. I will have a lot more of one color in the next build though. And thanks for all of your thoughts, peoples comments help me improve my builds. Quote
Wedge09 Posted August 7, 2013 Posted August 7, 2013 Really nice cannon :thumbup: As other said, maybe you should try to merge the three small parts in one and add some story Quote
Bkrosell Posted August 7, 2013 Author Posted August 7, 2013 Really nice cannon :thumbup: As other said, maybe you should try to merge the three small parts in one and add some story Thanks,but I think I will just leave them the way they are, but my next build will have a story with it for sure, I've seen other peoples builds and there story's add something a little more enjoyable than just a normal moc. Quote
Shadows of Nar Eurbrikka Posted August 7, 2013 Posted August 7, 2013 Judges have awarded you 2 XP! Your character's stats will be updated shortly. Quote
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