Enough: Part 9

[Skinny Boy]

Come on people, do I have to keep posting these: Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4, Part 5, Part 6, Part 7, Part 8.

Part 9: The importance of being a Train.

The smaller group who travelled through the park, are out already! (sorry) As always, they look for a building that looks good enough to stay in. Another red one is found:

Jack: "I'll check it out."

"Downstairs clear."

"Helloo? Anyone up here?"

"What the?"

"Its clear, and theres a fridge!" (sorry about the blur)

"Now why is there a bike up here?" (Sketch!)

"Raaaagghh!"

"What are you doing!?"

Captain: "Put down the bat."

Sooner than later:

The crazed man tells his story:

"So, I was on my way home. Like every other day, I got on the subway. Everything was fine until we were about a mile from here. The front of the train broke off, leaving the middle and back carriages to go by themselves. More people were in the back, and most of 'em went crazy. Pretty soon, the back carriage pushed the middle one out of the way, and we crashed, right out back. The end carriage broke the protective fence and we all poured out. I rushed inside. Luckily, noone else wanted to stay. So I brought the fridge upstairs, boarded up the back door and converted my bike into a generator. The only weapon I have is the bat, so I've been liftin' those weights ever since."

"Wait. Theres train tracks outside?"

"Yeah. Right out that window."

"Whoah."

"Were there any injuries?"

"I'd say about 3 people broke a limb. Noone was left behind anyway."

"You know the tracks are the main border between us and the zombies, once you go through them, everything seems different."

Captain: "Yeah, well we're not goin anywhere without the others. I guess we're stayin the night here."

Notes:

1. Sorry about the light changing in most pics. Today had very weird weather.

2. I'm surprised that I built this today, and managed to photograph and post it. Yay me .

3. I took Zepher's comment seriously:

all the houses in the siries could use some work. They need more inside detail!

4. Have a look at the loner. Thanks ricecracker.

5. The colour of the guy with the bat is one of the few different shades of green that are easy to read.

Thanks for looking.

[Zepher]

Nice job, I really like it. See, doesn't it look better now? I think that there's more to look at, which is always important!

Care to ttake the time to make a character sheet? There's starting to be so many. Prehaps some of them should start dying off. You know, population control

[Guss]

I agree with Zepher, there is a lot of people now but I think you prepared us some action with some deaths soon ! does the bike is here to product electricity for the fridge ? ^^

[Lego12]

I like it! Two new members join the group, yay! I can't wait to see more of your comics!

[Skinny Boy]

Nice job, I really like it. See, doesn't it look better now? I think that there's more to look at, which is always important!

Care to ttake the time to make a character sheet? There's starting to be so many. Prehaps some of them should start dying off. You know, population control

I'll try to make a topic talking about the cast. Don't worry, some will die, this is meant to be a dramatic series

I agree with Zepher, there is a lot of people now but I think you prepared us some action with some deaths soon ! does the bike is here to product electricity for the fridge ? ^^

Yes! I'm so glad you noticed that.

I like it! Two new members join the group, yay! I can't wait to see more of your comics!

Thanks Lego12. I haven't heard from you much lately And nice job with the Pirate Reviews.

[Asuka]

A pretty interesting story, and told in a pretty exciting way too!

[Skinny Boy]

Thanks Asuka. Glad you like it.

[z_zadar]

The suspense is growing... what's on the other side of tracks?

Great great work!