Enough: Part 8

[Skinny Boy]

Are you on a different planet? Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4, Part 5, Part 6, Part 7.

Part 8: Riverbeds and tired heads.

Last time, the group split up into two groups, one went through the park, and one took the truck around the park. This part follows the group that went through the park.

They arrive at a bridge, and another stop sign:

Jack reads a note under the sign:

"Though the river may be dry, Cedar Bay shall never die."

Captain: "Well, lets get movin."

Part 8.5: Crazed and Amused.

After successfully making it through the riverbed, the group find themselves at another odd place:

Jack tries communicating with this creature :

"Hey-

"Just a minute."

GASP! Another attack!:

"Hey. What are you doing?"

All except loner: "Whoah!"

Loner: "Success!"

Jack: "Hey come here a minute."

"Do you wanna join our group? That was a fantastic display of your fuel to kill." (pun intended )

Loner: "Sure, i'll join ya. You guys got a flamethrower?"

And with that, a friendship was born new member had joined the group.

Notes:

1. Yes, that was awfully short. But, if I didn't build something soon, I would have to wait two weeks! I know masterpieces aren't rushed, but I have other things going on.

2. Sorry to dissappoint those who voted for the park. Lik I said, I have had no experience in building nature MOCs. Though, I hope the fire-gas-tube technique made it better.

3. The next part shall not be for ages. Christmas tests, mean study, but if you feel you can't go that long without seeing one of my creations, (ricecracker ) I'll be posting some more minifigs today or tomorrow.

Thanks for looking.

Edited November 15, 2008 by Skinny Boy

[Professor Flitwick]

Great part of the story! Not my most favourite part, but certainly good. Don't worry about it being short 'all good things come in small sizes' (though your bigger ones are still brilliant ). You may wanna think about changing the colour of the writing of the shirtless guy.

[Ricecracker]

Great Job! i love the fence technique that you use in your MOCs (and i actually stole that idea for one of mine ). i also think adding the lone wolf to great will be a nice twist (seeing how he reacts to being in a group). i think you have a great job without going too much into scenery etc.

-Ricecracker

oh, and i'll understand if you can't make one for a while, though i just might not show it

[pr0visorak]

Nice story and great job I simply love it

[Skinny Boy]

Great part of the story! Not my most favourite part, but certainly good. Don't worry about it being short 'all good things come in small sizes' (though your bigger ones are still brilliant ). You may wanna think about changing the colour of the writing of the shirtless guy.

Thanks. I'm on it.

Great Job! i love the fence technique that you use in your MOCs (and i actually stole that idea for one of mine ). i also think adding the lone wolf to great will be a nice twist (seeing how he reacts to being in a group). i think you have a great job without going too much into scenery etc.

Thanks ricecracker. I actually didn't think about the lone wolf's attitude. Good idea .

Edit: I thought i'd ask, does anyone get the title of Part 8.5? Do you know what it is based on?

Edited November 15, 2008 by Skinny Boy

[z_zadar]

Edit: I thought i'd ask, does anyone get the title of Part 8.5? Do you know what it is based on?

Dazed and confused?

[Skinny Boy]

Dazed and confused?

Of course Z. Glad someone got it. Are you posting here because you are posting this on Storyatures, by any chance?