[Challenge 3][Cat B][K - B06] Advance Scouting on Sorn

[mediumsnowman]

Location: B06 - Sorn

Tags: N/A

This is a rebuild of my own Week 4 (!) build, Equipment Drop.

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This was supposed to be my week off. I was just getting ready to travel back to Orinshi for a nice, relaxing vacation when I got an "emergency call" to do some advance scouting on Sorn. I get to the hanger and evidently I'm also supposed to install some equipment. As no minifigure has yet walked its surface Kawashita needed some sensory equipment installed to guide in the big transport ships. So here I am, fastening down the final component of the first device. One down, nineteen to go...

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[Challenge 3][Cat B][K - B06] Advance Scouting on Sorn

[Challenge 3][Cat B][K - B06] Advance Scouting on Sorn

Improvements include:

-SNOT work for the land and platform as well as water

-Better, more visually interesting colors

-More detailed equipment

-Clearer photography

-I'll be honest, the border on the original sucked so I got rid of it for this one

Thanks for looking! Comments and criticism welcome.

[EpsilonEta]

I like the base of the plarform but the shoreline look a bit sharp. I think slopes would have worked better.

[LordDan]

Like you mentioned the added details, more vibrant colors and SNOT work make this look way better. My only criticism is that the bubbles don't look natural because for the most part they are very evenly spaced out and look repetitive.

[Andromedas Gates]

The judges awarded you 6 points.