mediumsnowman Posted January 10, 2016 Posted January 10, 2016 Location: B06 - Sorn Tags: N/A This is a rebuild of my own Week 4 (!) build, Equipment Drop. BEGIN TRANSMISSION 04: SPECIAL FORCES JEBEDIAH O'REILLY TO KAWASHITA HQ SECURE CHANNEL 768954 8 JUNALI AD 3815 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This was supposed to be my week off. I was just getting ready to travel back to Orinshi for a nice, relaxing vacation when I got an "emergency call" to do some advance scouting on Sorn. I get to the hanger and evidently I'm also supposed to install some equipment. As no minifigure has yet walked its surface Kawashita needed some sensory equipment installed to guide in the big transport ships. So here I am, fastening down the final component of the first device. One down, nineteen to go... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- END TRANSMISSION 04 [Challenge 3][Cat B][K - B06] Advance Scouting on Sorn [Challenge 3][Cat B][K - B06] Advance Scouting on Sorn Improvements include: -SNOT work for the land and platform as well as water -Better, more visually interesting colors -More detailed equipment -Clearer photography -I'll be honest, the border on the original sucked so I got rid of it for this one Thanks for looking! Comments and criticism welcome. Quote
EpsilonEta Posted January 11, 2016 Posted January 11, 2016 I like the base of the plarform but the shoreline look a bit sharp. I think slopes would have worked better. Quote
LordDan Posted January 15, 2016 Posted January 15, 2016 Like you mentioned the added details, more vibrant colors and SNOT work make this look way better. My only criticism is that the bubbles don't look natural because for the most part they are very evenly spaced out and look repetitive. Quote
Andromedas Gates Posted January 15, 2016 Posted January 15, 2016 The judges awarded you 6 points. Quote
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