SevenDeadlyStreamers 158 posts Posted April 6 Something is amiss at Cap’n Tongs’ restaurant, the Sea Rat’s Scullery! Normally the fish that are caught are the freshest around, however that has not been the case lately. Fish are now floating dead on the surface and the ones that are caught go bad within hours. Even rats have been spotted onboard lured in by the smell of rotten fish. Maybe there are toxins in the water or perhaps a temperature change killing all the fish? Or could there be something more supernatural lurking beneath the waves in the New Haven seas? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NOD 1748 posts Posted April 6 Excellently done! The story and characters have been adjusted. I like the new people and everyone's faces. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jeff of Clubs 746 posts Posted April 9 Excellent intro MOC! Glad you could join us and hope to see more of your work here. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kai NRG 10265 posts Posted April 9 This is pretty funny and also kind of creepy! Great use of those weird colored fish and I really like the color of the swordfish on top! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Captain Braunsfeld 6887 posts Posted April 10 Congratulations Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Fraunces 1604 posts Posted April 10 Very nice , really like how you directly tie your story together with the overarching happenings Share this post Link to post Share on other sites