Axle's first Vignette.

[Axle]

Uh.. this is my first vig, and it's in LDD.

Here are pics.

A man comes home from work and finds a Robber, who has trahsed his house.

Pics:

Front door:

Inside:

Top:

Side:

This MOC could also be made into a finished house, which I makng in it right now.

Do you think its any good? It's my first one after all and I think the first in LDD?

Sorry for the huge pics :S

Edited June 14, 2007 by Axle

[Athos]

Hard to tell what's going on. And the house doesn't really look all that trashed. A good first effort. I bet its hard to do detail work in LDD...

Steve

[Asuka]

Your MFs

[UniqueBuilder]

I semi-like it.. :-P You need more detail! That's the VERY MOST important thing in a vignette! ;-)

When you have such little space to work on, it must be packed with details, yet simple and effective..

I really like the idea/concept behind this vignette, but you need more details. More tiling? More walls? Maybe you could get some inspiration here?

I'd love to see more from you, Axle, but not in LDD. If you're going to make a digital creation, use MLCad and PovRay, it allows for more detail and much better viewing. ;-)

[Wout]

I like it, just some more details :-)

[Lasse D]

I have only worked very little with LDD, but I know that there are very few parts to work with, which might be why there isn't much details as noted earlier.

When making vigs, I prefer that the message gets slapped right in your face like in a comic strip, and the only real complaint related to this in your vig is that it isn't immediately clear that it is a robber that has trashed the house. You don't have to add a lot of details - that might just clutter everything up. You have already places a letter on the ground. If you added some more of those and placed them as if they have been thrown away while searching or make a painting that is tilted on the wall, I think the message would be clearer.

The posture of the minifigs is perfect and the rest of the scene with the single wall and roof is just as it should be in my opinion - it is just the mess that isn't messy enough.

I look forward to the final product if you intend on improving on it (I hope this has not scared you away!)

[Axle]

Thanks for the feedback, I'm going to redo it now,

Really, thanks.

Ax.

EDIT:

Moderators can delete some pics if there is too many,......

Changes: more letters, a picture on wall, twisted objects and Tile on roof is gone.

Edited June 22, 2007 by Axle

[Lasse D]

OK. Now there's no doubt that the robber has trashed the house X-D

Seriously. It's great!

... but what's the story about the minifig that has lost everything but the legs?

[Axle]

X-D

He he....those are suposed to pants that he was rooting through, Couldn't find the right position for 'em, but at least now it looks like a thrashed house.

Ax