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[Louie le Brickvalier]

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Edited October 19, 2017 by Louie le Brickvalier

[tf_mxsh12]

It's nice seeing stories illustrated in Lego form. Your story, thus far, is fantastic! I guess I'm just a sucker for heartwarming stories. Anyway, I look forward to seeing how the adventure continues.

One small proofreading note, though: in your story, you included the line “Get the horse, laddie! Get it know or you shall face the dreadful pain of twenty thrashings!” The line "Get it know" should actually be "Get it now."