(sone free build) Raiding the ruins

[Legofin2012]

-After eliminating he rebel in the Black swamps, I used the troopers comlink to track rebels on Tatooine. I called for back-up, and locked the coordinates in to the ship's navicomputer. Finding the rebels in some ruins,we commenced the raid.-

-The rebels dead, we searched the ruins, a wooden shelter, a few weapons and buckets of water, nothing of much use to the Empire. We are on returning to the Avenger now.-

My second free build, and will my first one and this be scored, or have I misunderstood?

[Tariq j]

Sweet MOC diorama, I like the wooden shelter!

Edited August 3, 2013 by Tariq j

[BEAVeR]

Congratulations with your second mini-diorama! Your use of texture really sands out (like on the first one): the smooth and studded sand and the ruined building. Looks really nice!

I'm wondering what this initiative will bring up...

[Captain Settle]

Nice vignette. I like the ruined and makeshit look of it all, and I love the pose of the dead storm trooper.

[Nom Carver]

I am glad to see a trooper with your enthusiasm, its a good thing you are on our side with such iniciative you should be on the fast way to succes among the imperial ranks, take no prisoners.

I like how you manage to transmit the action going on in such a small space and with a very good picture.

Edited August 3, 2013 by Nom Carver

[Erdbeereis]

Another nice little MOC. One thing that I think you should considering doing next time is to work a little on your photography. Improving the lighting and angles at which you take the pictures would help a lot to present your creation in a better manner.

[Brickdoctor]

Nice work with more color this time — tan, black, greys, dark tan, sand green; I like it a lot better than your last MOC. I also like the combination of the smooth, studded, curved, and angled sand. Like Erdy said, I think it could make it a lot easier to see your MOCs with better lightning. I'd lower the camera angle on the overall view, and also try to find a larger source of light so the harsh camera flash doesn't have to be used.

Yes, all free builds are scored. But we have to give the judges time to get scores in. Usually we'll try to get you a score within 24 hours.

[Legofin2012]

Thank you all again, and yes photography is definitely something I find hard, but joined the Reviewers Academy which has given me some tips that I'll use.

[Shadows of Nar Eurbrikka]

Judges have awarded you 3 XP! Your character's stats will be updated shortly.

[Legofin2012]

Thank you judges!