brickboy12 Posted February 21, 2013 Posted February 21, 2013 (edited) The beginning of the end. In a great burial chamber of a long forgotten ruler the great powers of historica meet . Jarls niece: as you know we are gathered here to decide upon the action taken upon the death of our high king. I will be taking the place of Jarl after his disappearance. But first I must congratulate you all on your disguises Dextrus: We must fight! Artorious:I agree we must fight before the black mage gathers more strength Ssilyrrlith: we are strong but not strong enough for a siege we must use cunning Artoriuos : what about assassins? Ssilyrrlith : Yesss! Assassins. Dextrus : That’s cowardly we must fight man to man not in cold blood. Rego enters with a lady dressed in red. Rego: It’s our only hope. Jarls niece : why are you here? Rego: I heard the leaders of the guilds were meeting here, although I did not get a direct invitation. It must have been intercepted by the hand. Luckily I have my sources . Jarls niece looking sheepish. Jarls niece: well ermm yes it must. Back to business. Ssilyrrlith: Who is this woman? Rego : ahh a most interesting lady I met coming here I believe she has made a wonderful discovery. Lady : I am lady Meerston however You may call me Chantelle. I have worked with the elves to find parts of the long lost Telnaths of the past and the end result is what I hold in my hand. After they had seated themselves they carried on discussing tactics until they had devised a suitable plan. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Whilst the dwarves dig the tunnel. The five task takers train. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- On the day of the mission the five task takers met at the entrance to the tunnel. Anzpher of Nocturnus led the way, followed by kaliphlinian Burktan, chantelle came next , guarded by Darstan from mitgardia with estern of avalonia guarding the rear. When they came to the end of the tunnel anzpher cut of the top soil. Anzpher: There are four hand of corruption soldiers on duty,Burktan you take out the one on the tower me and Darstan will take the two on the wall, Estern take the one on the ground. NOW! They sprung upon the defenders with the help of surprise they overcame them with ease. After that they creeped up on victors cottage and a went in the room was filled with smoke a silhouette stood by a table . Victor : I see you have come then Anzpher : yes we are here Darstan : and we are herer to kill you Victor : well theres a time for every one and I guess mine is now Victor grabbed a bottle of the table and drank it , he collapsed instantly. Two days later the five adventourourers found themselves attacking a hoc castle , the attack was led by Lord Selby the lord of the isles of lyson . Many brave historicians died that day including Anzpher ,Burktan and Estern. After the battle Lord selby surveyed the dead and came across an old man who was groaning , Lord selby was about to put him out of his misery when he said: Rabstan : take my weapon and use it well it is yours now as I have no son and you fight bravely with a defensive, everyday weapon With that the man died. Lord Selby said to all around : I fear this is not the end but the beginning of the end as we all still have to find victors helm and rebuild historica. Two days later the five adventourourers found themselves attacking a hoc castle , the attack was led by Lord Selby the lord of the isles of lyson . Many brave historicians died that day including Anzpher ,Burktan and Estern. After the battle Lord selby surveyed the dead and came across an old man who was groaning , Lord selby was about to put him out of his misery when he said: Rabstan : take my weapon and use it well it is yours now as I have no son and you fight bravely with a defensive, everyday weapon With that the man died. Lord Selby said to all around : I fear this is not the end but the beginning of the end as we all still have to find victors helm and rebuild historica. My scored builds will be the first picture (interior) and the last two ones. [the one of his house and the battle field] Edited April 30, 2013 by brickboy12 Quote
Brickington Posted February 21, 2013 Posted February 21, 2013 Very nice story. I can't wait to see more. Quote
Legonardo Posted February 23, 2013 Posted February 23, 2013 A nice start BB12, I really like the window in the first pic! clever way getting round not having the guild leaders parts the second photo is a little too red IMO, if you still have it intack try retaking it with more light. haven't read the story yet (im in a bit of a rush, don't have much time for EB at the mo) but will get to it soon keep it up! ~Legonardo Quote
brickboy12 Posted February 23, 2013 Author Posted February 23, 2013 Yeah I might take another pic because the lights bouncing of some stuff in pic 2. The windows where accidentall I was sorting my bricks out when I came across two mudguards and for some reason I put them together and I thought that looks good so I found a way to put them together and then I found more arches an made two more Walls then I put the Walls at angles and I thought this could be used for something. And so it was. Quote
brickboy12 Posted April 30, 2013 Author Posted April 30, 2013 (edited) The second part is now up!!! Now for the 3rd The third is now up Edited April 30, 2013 by brickboy12 Quote
de Gothia Posted April 30, 2013 Posted April 30, 2013 You sure have improved brickboy! The minifig posings are great! A lot of nice action in your mocs! You should however try to improve your photos. Either by editing them or to not incorporate so much of your room, tiles etc (see the last two pics). Quote
brickboy12 Posted April 30, 2013 Author Posted April 30, 2013 Yep i totally agree dg however these two were a bit rushed Quote
Maxim I Posted May 2, 2013 Posted May 2, 2013 You have indeed improved a lot :) I really like your scored builds!!! Like they already said, try to improver your photography, but I know that's not simple :) Quote
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