Hold Your Breath

[Kahgarak]

Here you can see a quick test movie from my stop motion ''Hold your breath''.

I'd like some comments about the giant Polyp Squid i made.Unlike the baby Squids,who suck life energy out,this big momma simply eats you.

Note the Morak firing an Air bubble at the Squid.

[Zaktan of the Shadows]

Sorry... but it isn't working

-ZotS

[Capn Kirk 911]

Sorry... but it isn't working

-ZotS

Samething happened to me....

[Kahgarak]

It's fixed.

[vahkimetru]

Very nice emotions shown by the matoran. Isn't Guhrak a Rahkshi though?

[Lord Admiral Helden Ravensdorn]

Constructive Critique:

While the animation seemed smooth enough for most of it, I suggest more frames during the action sequences. Honestly, the giant squid attack happened so fast that I had to watch it about 5 times to clearly understand what happened. Lastly, I'd make the text bigger and put it in its own box below the rest of the animation :)

Lookin' good, man!

[Kahgarak]

No, Guurahk is a Rahkshi though.

OK,I'll try more frames next time.

[GravyTrain]

Slow. It. Down. This MUST be done. I can't make head nor tails of what's happening and I can't read the text quick enough! I'm not The Flash! It's especially hard for dyspraxic/dyslexic people who can't read very fast, although I doubt even a normal person could.

Seriously. Slow it down.

Seriously, though.

[Zaktan of the Shadows]

The was smooth. But it was extremley fast. Cool though.

-ZotS

[Dino_Bot]

That was fast.

It was funny when Ghurak was shaking his head.

[Kahgarak]

I think that my next stop motion will be made tomorrow or the day after that.