Sunder Posted September 9, 2012 Posted September 9, 2012 This ancient monolith, we found on the Moon... calls me. I feel it. It's alive. I feel pulsating energy inside. Something is burred in it. And it wants to be free. It calls. Touch me! No, I don't want. I have to fight. I must resist. Come, do not be afraid. Come on! You can't make me do this! I must get out of here. I can't stand for long. They think I became mad. I'm not crazy! Why does it calls only me?! Yes, I have chosen you. Just touch me, set me free. But they don't let me touch the monolith. I should not do this. They aren't watching now. I will do what you ask! It is so cold, even through the suit I feel it. You tricked me! Fool. I'll consume you. And all the people here. Noooo! RUN OUT OF HERE! Quote
Wedge09 Posted September 11, 2012 Posted September 11, 2012 (edited) Good work I hope that monolite in the realty isn't on the moon because I think it will be a problem. :laugh: Edited September 11, 2012 by Wedge09 Quote
TheRedGuy Posted September 11, 2012 Posted September 11, 2012 Looks fantastic. Can we get a picture of the creature alone? Quote
soccerkid6 Posted September 11, 2012 Posted September 11, 2012 Scarily impressive The building looks great and the action going on is excellent Quote
Sunder Posted September 11, 2012 Author Posted September 11, 2012 Can we get a picture of the creature alone? Thank you. Quote
DraikNova Posted September 11, 2012 Posted September 11, 2012 Wow. That recoloured version is even better. Quote
into the blue Posted September 11, 2012 Posted September 11, 2012 Yep, that ain't gonna end well. Quote
DraikNova Posted September 11, 2012 Posted September 11, 2012 (edited) I can see it now: 'Now, earthlings, bow and tremble at my feet (or tentacle tips actually )! Edited September 11, 2012 by DraikNova Quote
monsinjor Posted September 17, 2012 Posted September 17, 2012 This is excellent. When I started to read your prologue, it reminded me on the game Dead Space. :) Quote
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