CoD: Apoc Comic- Prologue

[hawkyboy4]

Some of you may have heard over the past few days that I have been planning to create a MOC series, of which other users can comment on who/what they like/dislike about it. The first chapter is to be released tomorrow, and as a wind up to it, I thought I would add a small backstory to it. I have noticed that the photography is terrible, however it isn't that easy with a phone camera in a yellow room on the floor. Tomorrow's chapter should have better photography, as it is based at the top of a tall(ish) building, which is situated on my table.

Comments are welcomed, though criticism is wanted much more.

2nd February, 2018:

We ended the war today.

Price and I raided a "plantation". It was a long trek, and it took us 4 days to reach it, just in time to see Jacques Le Franks, now the ex-president of France, sign some kind of deal with Muhammed Al Kapif, the biological weapons dealer. Word had been that Jacques had wanted a treaty with Russia, to stop France from becoming involved in another war. But what was he doing here, with a middle-eastern arms-dealer?

Price remained behind as I took down the two insurgents who were keeping guard, with a single grenade. Straight away I knew something was wrong, as I confronted the two leaders, Jacques wasn't moving, and suddenly, he fell to the ground, dead. It was only then that I saw Muhammed's gun, a plain pistol, in his gloved hand. He turned the gun to me, and immediately I reacted, putting an end to his threat in this world. Price was quick behind me, and his unshaven face looked down at the two corpses, then to me, as though it had been my fault. "Get backup, they'll have their own on standby in case anything goes wrong." He whispered, squatting next to Jacques' bloody corpse, his hands flicking over him, looking for any signs of life.

As I radioed in, I saw a scrap of white next to the ex-president's corpse. I realised it was the paper that he had Muhammed sign before his death. I finished the call and stepped over to pick up the torn sheet.

"I, ___________, agree to supply France with the... ...immediate shipments will occur, whether this document is signed or not.

That was the only readable piece of text left on the sheet, and I threw it down in anger.

Price looked up. "Whatever you think they were doing, you're wrong, it looks like they have been shipping supplies of illegal drugs through golden trophies. Don't believe me? Check the box over there." At that, he motioned to a crate at the entrance to the plantation, right next to a very upset camel.

Cautiously, I made my way over to the crates, and checked the contents. Price had been right; it was only drugs.

Something still didn't feel right, and when I confronted Price, he agreed, however he told me to keep it quiet, and not mention it.

So now we wait for our backup, I just hope that whatever has been going on is stopped before it gets anywhere.

Note: I did have pictures, however I seem to be able to be unable to upload them, as it says they are too big, which is strange, as I could before, in another topic. I may have to deeplink them instead.

Edited December 4, 2010 by hawkyboy4