Skinny Boy Posted April 25, 2009 Posted April 25, 2009 Parts: 1, 2, 3. Part 4: Preemptive Hike. Carl woke to his phone ringing. Voice: "Carl! Its Hank. Theres soldiers right outside my building. They're coming to get us!" "What?! How do you know?" "My neighbors keep calling me out. Run Carl! While you still can!" "Hang on, let me get changed" Carl: "Now, why are they coming for us?" "Oh crap, they're on my floor! Just get outta there Carl! Now!" "But Hank?" "Just go__________" "Goddamnit! Alright. Let me just leave them a little surprise." Voice nextdoor: "Hey Carl, theres people here for you. Will I let them up?" "Ok, out the window it is." Agent Travis: "Ok...... NOW!" Later that day. "Sir... we got trooper 521: Hank McFarlane, but we missed trooper 527: Carl Grant." Mayor: "Missed him!? How could you miss him?!" "Well sir, it seems he jumped out his window before we entered the room." "Out the window?" "Yes sir." "He jumped out the window from 'G' level?" "That is what we concluded." "That son-of-a-female canine. Trying to outrun his own government." "He also left explosive devices in his room, nearly killing one of our soldiers." "This is unacceptable. I cannot believe, we have a- Agent: "Sir! We got trooper 527: Carl Grant!" Mayor: "Where was he?" "At a hospital sir." Mayor: "Well lets get to the location then. And the machines are up and running?" Agents: "Yessir." "Good. Haha. Change is good." End Part 4. Thanks for looking/reading! Quote
Asuka Posted April 26, 2009 Posted April 26, 2009 An exciting, dark and mysterious story indeed... maybe the single chapters´re a little short, but, on the other hand, maybe I´m just too curious to see what´s happening next... Quote
Skinny Boy Posted April 27, 2009 Author Posted April 27, 2009 An exciting, dark and mysterious story indeed... maybe the single chapters´re a little short, Indeed. And they'll only be getting shorter :skull: but, on the other hand, maybe I´m just too curious to see what´s happening next... Thats what I want to hear! I've alwyas preferred seeing/reading things in small instalments, and i'm glad to see others do aswell. Thanks. Quote
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