Ship's Kitchen

[xbor]

Vig. 68a

This MOC present a ship's kitchen, but we coud see that pirates using this room not only for cooking and eating.

Edited November 16, 2009 by SlyOwl

[L-space]

So that's what they mean by "dead drunk"

[Captain Blackmoor]

Haha, the kitchen. I was planning to build a kitchen as well, you've done a great job on it.

What I like:

The idea is nice.

All the different sort of things going on in here: getting drunk, cannibalism...

I like the barrels with the viking shields on them. The cauldron is nice too, filled with human parts...

The dead drunken pirate on the table is funny too. Looks like he is lying there for ages!

What could be improved:

Add some stuff in the barrels. They look a bit bare now.

Try to tile some things, like the floor and the top of the walls. I don't know if you have enough but it adds more realism.

I don't like the green pants from one of the pirates, but that's a minor point.

It would be nice if you gave the monkey a weapon, a sword for example.

Another point of detail: add some wasted wine on the floor. Leaking out of the glass from the pirate in the corner.

Great entry!

Edited March 27, 2009 by Cap'n Blackmoor

[Erdbeereis]

Nice entry idea Xbor.

One of my favorite parts is the shark hanging on the wall. It really stands out. The monkey jumping down is also fun.

Lastly, good work with the barrel shelf. It seems to have a very nice design.

Improvement Suggestions:

1) Very minor point, but I'm not a big fan of the pony tail on the pirate walking down the stairs. Perhaps something more "manly" would be better.

2) I think adding a fireplace somewhere would be a great idea, so the pirates can have some baked fish and keep their toesies warm.

3) Placing some goblets on the floor with a plume coming out the side to give the effect of spilled drink would be nice.

4) Instead of that little brown table in the center, maybe something a bit larger would be nice. Then you could even put some turkey legs, sausage, some other food items there.

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You have started this quite nicely, and with a few touch-ups here and there it'll be even better! Good work, and best of luck to you in the contest!

[Zorro]

Great entry, I just love what you've done with the Roman shield barrels!

Good work.

[Ratshot]

I just love what you've done with the Roman shield barrels!

I thought those were Viking shields?

[Guss]

that's a really cool entry ! I love how you put the shark to the wall

but.. what does the cook is cooking ? I can see legs and .. a head ??? disgusting!

[Captain Blackmoor]

CANNIBALISM!

I like the idea though.

[Dwarfinator]

Ooh, a kitchen entry. Cool. I like the islander poking his head out of the crate.

Captain McSkivvies

[Captain Blackmoor]

Is it a spy? Is it waiting to be cooked? I don't really know what that islander is doing there. As well for the bat.

As said before: It looks like cannibalism...

[Fluyt]

That's a good "last-minute" entry I think (it ends monday or tuesday right?)

Possible improvement points:

1. I think the "barrels" would look better with the official barrel piece (here).

2. Maybe a thinner tabletop, like here.

Good points:

1. Good amount of "action" going on, like the guy getting kicked down the stairs.

2. That's some "dubious soup" getting made there .

3. Sneaky bastard in the crate, is he spying?, is he their next meal?, who knows

[74louloute]

I really like the monkey posing ! It really like if it jump on that poor shoved lad !

[Ratshot]

I really like all the crazyness going on.

WHAT I LIKE

1.The monkey leaping looks great

2.The BIG barrels of booze.

3.Cannibalism....... IT MAKE ME SICK :sick: :pir-sick:

POSSIBLE IMPROVEMENTS

1.The pirate with the pony tail looks....discusting shall we say.

2.Maybe you could tile the floor.

3.I would like to see a better story if possible.

Good Job and Good Luck

[Legoking]

Great entry, I just love what you've done with the Roman shield barrels!

Good work.

I do agree. I too really like how you made those barrels. You have made a ship's kitchen very nicely.

Possible Improvements

1) Your MOC kind of looks a bit dull and lacking detail. You could possibly add some tiles and put some mice on the floor to give your MOC more detail.

Overall- I think you have done a great job creating your MOC!

LegoKing

[Dr. Steve]

I really like the large Kegs, Awsome