Dark Sword Ragnarok Posted August 1, 2008 Posted August 1, 2008 (edited) EDIT: Since I can't think of a good name for my new Sith Warrior (Mysterious Figure for now) if anyone has a good name (ie Darth "enter name here") please suggest it either in PM or on this thread. He needs a cool name! Thanks. Alright, taking a quick break from funny comics. This time around, I have a more serious comic, including my first Lightsaber duel! A few new characters this time, so check out the list! Enjoy! Characters: (Letter used to represent each character in the dialouge in parenthases) Jack (J) Jessa(j) 214(214) Clone Sergeant( c ) Mysterious Figure(MF) MagnaGuard (MG) Republic base: Directly after Droid Attack. J: What's the damage report, sergeant? C: Not much damage, sir. They didn't get into the base. J: Good. Did you find that last Magna Guard? C: No, Sir. We're keeping an eye out for it. We have reason to believe it is still in the area. J: Perfect. Any word on that mysterious warrior that was leading the attack? C: Yes Sir. We believe he may be a Dark Jedi, sir. He was wielding a red lightsaber. J: Dang. More to worry about. I'm going to lead the search for that Magna Guard. C: Uh, Sir? J: Yeah? C: I don't think that's necessary. J: Why? C: Look. (BOOM!) All: Ah! MF:..... J: State your business here! MF:...... J: Talk or we blast you! MF:........ J: What's wrong, can't use your friggin' mouth? Talk! MF: My business here is a proposition. J: And what's that? MF: That you and your warriors pack up now, and leave this planet. J: And if we don't comply? MF: We destroy this base, and you. J: Are you kidding? We just pummeled your droids to a pile of steaming scrapmetal, and you think you can make threats? MF: Yes. J: Listen, this is my territory. Go (Censored version) jump off a cliff. MF: Very well. Open fire. MG: Uh-oh..... *CRACK* J: Big mistake. MF: You are weak, Jedi! J: You ain't seen nothin' yet! MF: Ready to give in? J: Yeah right! Jessa! J: Looks like we're even now! MF: You are mistaken, Jedi. My skils are much more developed than yours. I will be victorious! MF: Prepare to die. J: Oh, come on! EDIT: Scroll past Shoc's post to see the seccond half! Edited August 3, 2008 by Dark Sword Ragnarok Quote
Shoc Posted August 1, 2008 Posted August 1, 2008 Wow, this is getting quite interesting (not to say it wasn't before). The plot is more advanced and I like the lightsabers. By the way, did the Magnaguard's "arm" fall off or get 'sabered' off? J: Listen, this is my territory. Go (Censored version) jump off a cliff. EDIT:Someone needs to post here so I can post the seccond half. It won't let me post all the images at once! Why so? :skull: Quote
Dark Sword Ragnarok Posted August 1, 2008 Author Posted August 1, 2008 (edited) Wow, this is getting quite interesting (not to say it wasn't before). The plot is more advanced and I like the lightsabers. By the way, did the Magnaguard's "arm" fall off or get 'sabered' off? Why so? :skull: Oops, just PM'd Imperialshadows to post, so I can finish! The board won't let me post so many images at once, I guess. Also, the MagnaGuard's Chaingun was snapped in half with the force. I tried to make it look like it was being bent, but it didn't work. Alright, here's the rest! MF: Nya! MF: Take this! J: Wha.... J: AAAAHHHHH!!!! MF: Hahaha, now to finish you off, Jedi! MF: HA! J: Neh... J: Ha! J: Hnnnn.... J: Yah! (Worst shot of the lot, you can see my fingertips and the other stuff in the backround. ) J: Yah! J: Hnn?!?! MF: Wha.....you.....you wounded me? MF: I...I will come back, Jedi. And you will die at my hands. Count on it. MF: Neh.... (Engines power up) *Whoosh* J: Gah!......Two-Fourteen! 214: Yes, Sir? J:Follow him! Take the Wolfen! Shoot him out of the sky! 214: Bloody Hell, Jack! I can't leave you here, wounded! J: Don't argue! GO! 214: Yes, Sir! 214: Blimey! A chance to prove myself! 214: Lets do this! All systems are green! Time to take off and take him down! *Whoosh* 214: Blimey, is this seat comforatable! Okay, maybe I did have some humor in this one! Hope you all liked it! My first attempt at action in non-vignette form. I think it turned out pretty good for a first try! I had a lot of fun doing this! I actually wrote up a script this time to follow when taking pics. Posting it all here was like experiencing the story all over again! DSR Edited August 3, 2008 by Dark Sword Ragnarok Quote
Shoc Posted August 1, 2008 Posted August 1, 2008 Oooh, flying double bladed lightsaber! I like the ending, and it ends on a sort of cliffhanger... (Worst shot of the lot, you can see my fingertips and the other stuff in the backround. ) MF: I...I will come back, Jedi. Cowardly... 214: Bloody Hell, is this seat comforatable! Haha, it looks quite cramped really. :skull: Quote
Dark Sword Ragnarok Posted August 1, 2008 Author Posted August 1, 2008 Oooh, flying double bladed lightsaber! I like the ending, and it ends on a sort of cliffhanger... I know, that was intended. Cowardly... Yes, he is. He was too ignorant to realize he'd met his match with Jack! When the going gets tough, the ignorant flee like babies! Haha, it looks quite cramped really. :skull: Actually, it is pretty roomy in there. Not as roomy as the Colbalt's cockpit, but pretty roomy for a 6-wide cockpit! DSR Quote
Shoc Posted August 1, 2008 Posted August 1, 2008 I know, that was intended. Well, yeah, I was just stating the obvious really. Actually, it is pretty roomy in there. Not as roomy as the Colbalt's cockpit, but pretty roomy for a 6-wide cockpit! Funny considering it's a ship from Star Fox, not even Star Wars. :skull: Quote
Dark Sword Ragnarok Posted August 1, 2008 Author Posted August 1, 2008 Funny considering it's a ship from Star Fox, not even Star Wars. :skull: Well, it works, doesn't it? DSR Quote
Shoc Posted August 1, 2008 Posted August 1, 2008 Well, it works, doesn't it? Yes, it does. I didn't know what the ship was meant to be until I looked in your sig, it's a great MOC by the way. :skull: Quote
Dark Sword Ragnarok Posted August 1, 2008 Author Posted August 1, 2008 Yes, it does. I didn't know what the ship was meant to be until I looked in your sig, it's a great MOC by the way. :skull: Thanks, that's what it's there for! Glad you like the comic and my Wolfen! DSR Quote
pr0visorak Posted August 2, 2008 Posted August 2, 2008 I really like the double lightsaberr and the part that it can be detatched! Quote
Dark Sword Ragnarok Posted August 2, 2008 Author Posted August 2, 2008 I really like the double lightsaberr and the part that it can be detatched! Thanks! I just happened to have an extra laying around. I connected the two using the end of the chrome spike piece that decorates the end of the original saber. I just cut it down to a size that fit good in minifig hands. DSR PS: If you haven't seen the others, click on the links in my sig. The first one kind of sucks, though. Quote
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