Castle Vig 6

[Lt. Veers]

The war between Crownies and skellies has waged on. Lets see whats happening today:

The Crownies, tiring of hit-and run attacks by the skellies, have decided to mount an attack. Here we see to Knights pulling up on shore at Skellieland:

Drama shot:

Birdseye:

Pulling up:

Tie up the boat:

Charge!

Feedback appriciated.

*knight* *skull*

[Lord Of Pies]

Nice MOC, I like the idea, and the boat being tied up, although one thing I do not like is the blue slope pieces as waves.

Aside from that minor nit-pick, good job.

[Asuka]

That

[Athos]

I think your vignettes are missing something. Its hard to say just what though. They seem a little flat, for lack of a better term.

The boat one is vertically flat. Also that boat is really big for a vignette. I'd suggest making a smaller boat, like this one. Then you could fit more landscaping on the 8x8 plate, which would really improve it.

Malice in the Palace is flat around the outsides. If you put some greebling (castle style, with weapons, shields, torches, etc) on the walls, I think it would help. Tiling the floors might help too. Some furniture on the lower level might help to. And some flags on the upper.

The Princess one is kind of plain. Its flat in color. It also lacks detail. I'd use only one stack of bars and put some walls in on either side. It'd make it more sturdy. Also way too much black.

The second one is better. This one isn't really all that flat. The landscaping is too blocky though. I'd also use more foilage pieces. Maybe a rock or road would help too.

The first one has too much grey and the wall isn't very interesting and its also flat. If you put some rubble around the base it might help. Also vary the color of the wall. A window might help too?

Steve