Castle Vig 4

[Lt. Veers]

I decided that my latest castle vig would be open-ended. So YOU make the story this time.

The vig:

Birdseye view:

The knight:

The back:

So what do you think is going on?

Comments welcome.

*knight* *skull*

[MagPiesRUs]

He overcooked his carrot and ran to the nearest source of water to put it out? :-P X-D

Nice little vig, I like the marshy water, although I think the trans-green seaweed looks a little out of place :-/

Good job *y*

[iamded]

One dark cloudy night, a loyal soldier of the good King was patrolling by lake. His friends were bored, and started practising their archery skills nearby. The practice soon turned into a competition, with the 2 participants firing at a rough bulls-eye etched into a tree. The patrolling knight ignored this little competition, keeping his mind on the task at hand, being the good lil' knight he was. The competition heated up, and one of the archers was only 3 points away from scoring the winning shot. The other archer anxiously wanted to win, and as the archer was about to take his shot, the jealous archer yelled "BLEEAURG" at the top of his lungs, putting the archer off and sending his arrow flying in the completely wrong direction. It zipped through the air, and smacked right into the patrolling guard's head, knocking his helmet into the filthy swamp water below. After a loud and furious chat to the archers, the soldier stomped down to the putrid pool, grabbing a torch as he went, as his friends watched on. Reluctantly slinking into the water, he started searching, with a splitting head-ache, lazy friends, and swamp water in his pants. X-D

Neat little vig! Great swampy effects. Nice job! *y* (And great description, TinyPiesRUs! Hilarious!)

~Peace

[The Kid]

Hallucinating once again, Mr. Knight saw fit to slash at some seaweed with a flaming carrot.

Good vig, I like the water effects. I've been trying to do something like that myself...

TK

[Asuka]

A very neat swamp scenery.... it looks like he

[El Bucanero]

Seems like flaming carrots can come handy sometimes :-D

Well, perhaps the knight from vig 3 failed to resque the princess and another one is after her kiss already on his way?

Nice vig! Good piece usage. I agree about the trans green sea weed though, it's perhaps a bit too much. :-)

[Cardinal Brick]

I nice little vig, good use of the creaper and plant on top of the water. I also like the way it can serve as the begining of any number of stories. What does he plan to do with a knife and a flaming carrot?

[Athos]

Personally, I'm not a fan of open-ended vignettes, as part of the point is to tell a story in a tiny space. As to the constuction, I'm not a fan of the BURP usage. The plants are nice. The whole scene, however, needs something more... I'm not sure exactly what, because its an open-ended vignette so we don't know what you're trying to get at.

Steve

[Lt. Veers]

Thanks, guys! I'll try not to randomly place seaweed in the future.