A good challenge for lego designers

[Ronan]

Hi guys, I'd like to create a set, a small one, for a series I invented, that is some kind of saga, now this one I thinked should be one of the smallest in the series, a set priced 14,99€ and is inspired by a real gate. In the file you will find some reference photos and a prototype, made by myself, but that lacks a lot. I tried to make it, and I did my best, but it's not already what I'm looking for. Now what I ask you guys is to think as a real lego designer, so take this model and review it, change whatever you want or even start it again from the beginning, to make it looks like a real set, but the most important is: make it cool! This is not a contest, just an help I ask you. This idea could be interesting because everyone can make a different thing, that is related with his idea of lego set. Sorry for bad english.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/yoetg94jv2arrbc/set.to.rar?dl=0 

hope you enjoy this

Edited November 20, 2016 by Ronan
Type fix

[JopieK]

Maybe you should present in in some other way, I can't unrar it and it also seems to be rather unsafe to do it in this way Ronan!

[Ronan]

what do you mean? what should I do?

[Ronan]

I tried the link and it works

[Capparezza]

Let me take a guess what JopieK wanted to tell you: Don't hide your content behind a packed archive! Besides the notion, that a lot of people don't want to open packed archives from someone they don't know, you could present your ideas in a much better way. Get a free flickr or brickshelf account and post your stuff there, for example. You can directly link pictures from these two in your posts on Eurobricks.

[DaveDoc]

how does the Brickshelf account work.

 

[Ronan]

Ok guys, I think that this could be a beginning. 

On my Flickr your will find two photos of the prototype, now just tell me how to give you the ldd and the reference photos.

Edited November 22, 2016 by Ronan

[Ronan]

https://www.flickr.com/photos/138577687@N02/

[Darkdragon]

Are you asking the community to design/redesign something that you are planning to sell, based on your own fictional world/story?

[Ronan]

Not to sell, just to have for me.

I just want an help from great builders to make a cool set.

[Ronan]

Update: the link for only ldd file https://www.dropbox.com/s/h5etaenxod01028/set prototype.lxf?dl=0 don't know hoe to send you the reference pictures now.