Fernos V.3

[Hinckley]

This is my third attempt at making Fernos-the antagonist from an upcoming story on my website: Kingdom of the Lakes.

I will most likely still make some adjustments. I added a scar under his eye and tattoos to both arms, but I would like to make the scar more apparent-right now it looks to similar to the cheek bone lines, and I'd also like to make the arm tattoos bigger. But, I pretty much like it. I redesigned the pecs and abs completely as my original was a template from Classic-Castle and I wanted to design my own, so I could eventually sell the design.

Please feel free to let me know what you think of it.

[Lt. Veers]

Awesome customs. But are those tattoos or scars? And when is the Book of the Ancients coming out exactly?

[Johnny 5]

I like it overall, but to me the abs are a bit too flashy.

Maybe tone them down with thinner lines?

[iamded]

Very cool! I would suggest making the scar red, but then people might think it's just another tattoo. Still, it look very cool, not to mention evil! *y*

~Peace

[LuxorV]

Nice job *wub* *y* . I would make the scar more purple-ish, or red-ish brown, like those on Anankin's face. Or give it a smaller cros scar, like Takeshi's.

LuxorV

[Hinckley]

Thanks for the advice guys! I really like this forum. I got some really good insight from you guys and it helps out a lot. Thanks. *wub*

[Starwars4J]

I'd have to agree about the scar. Also a scar wouldn't be circular around the eye and have the eye still function, maybe change it's shape to a simple line or curved line?

Also he has a very long face, I'm not sure if that's what you were going for? Great job though! :-)

[LuxorV]

I'd have to agree about the scar. Also a scar wouldn't be circular around the eye and have the eye still function, maybe change it's shape to a simple line or curved line?

Also he has a very long face, I'm not sure if that's what you were going for? Great job though! :-)

As I see it, the scar is the slim line left-bent (MF's left) below the eye, while the red circle is a tatoo 8-|

LuxorV

[Siegfried]

I tend to agree with Johnny 5; the abs are great but probably should be either lighter or thinner. I also agree that the scar tends to blend into the cheek. Perhaps a darker colour? I think this is really good though and it seems incredible that you are a newbie at this. 8-

[Hinckley]

I'd have to agree about the scar. Also a scar wouldn't be circular around the eye and have the eye still function, maybe change it's shape to a simple line or curved line?

Good point. But the red circle around the eye-which matches the red circle on the chest-is a tattoo. The scar is the simple curved line under his left eye. :-P