Commander Beltar Posted April 30, 2016 Posted April 30, 2016 (edited) The story so far: First Day Aboard the Avenger At The Table-Before The Storm Rescue Mission Reassigned Eliminating The Competition Target Practice “Here we go again…” Evac Escape A Quick Transaction "Black Sunshine" Repel and Retreat Flatline Reflection A Promotional Meeting Previously: The New Squad Any Rebel on Kaut was a prime target at this point, but Beltar’s new squad was tasked with attempting to locate the stolen supercomputer. DC guessed that it A: Wouldn’t be in a high populated area, they wouldn't risk civvies, and B: Would be using large amounts of power for the Rebel’s to attempt to decode it. He was right. On the scanned map of the planet’s surface, there where multiple locations where large amount of power being used...In the middle of farmlands nonetheless. Using this information, he triangulated the possible location of the supercomputer. And now this squad was in the outskirts of the farmland of the bigger cities, they had discovered a trench, recently dug and decided to follow it. DC: Watch it soldiers, in coming! Beltar stay here! DT’s- With me! Alyin, you know the drill. Entire Unit: Sir, yes sir! The squad engaged the Rebels, two more had come off the pathway near the house, while the other two were completely off guard. DT-202: I got him! DT-101: Yeah right you did! DC: FOCUS MEN! DT’s: Yes Sir! Alyin: Yeah, you normally get left behind for a few missions, and as a medic. Beltar: Figured… Wait…Woah what’s going on over there? The two idiots where beating the one living Rebel, all of them where dead except this one, but Beltar knew this Rebel’s strategic value and that he was needed alive. DT-202: EY! Where is the computer! TELL US! Rebel: Ughh…. DT-101: HE WASN’T ASKING! Beltar pushed Alyin out of the way, and ran towards the other three, he pushed the two aside as DC watched in wonder…Beltar set his pack down, took the needle, and instantly administered it too the injured soldier. Beltar: Woah, move! Stop STOP! DT-101: What? What is the meaning of this, soldier? DC: Hmm….? Beltar, again knowing the value of this target, tried as much as he could to save him, and this kept that one Rebel alive. Beltar: Stay with me Rebel Scum… DT-202: What are you doing! Beltar: He’s an asset! We need him ALIVE! DT-101: But- DC: Let him work! I have to agree… Beltar had knocked him out to continue to work, once he was stable for the time being, Beltar got up and they continued to discuss the rest of the mission, and rather than continuing the search, they’d send DT’s for more scouting, and the rest would return to the rings to interrogate the Rebel. DC: I just dispatched the two nitwits, we will be taking him to the interrogation room. Beltar: Understood sir. Wait, he’s waking up. Alyin: Sir, The Room will be ready. DC: Good, now one second... DC: My turn...*punch* Alright, know that he’s out cold we are all good. Beltar: Well…That was…slightly unnecessary. Alyin: For now Beltar, yes it is. ===Later=== DC: Look…This is gonna heart real...real bad… Or I’ll take some information…You know… Rebel: I… Don’t know anything! Please! AHHHHHHHHHHH DC: I JUST NEED THE LOCATION! After a little more…’convincing’ the Rebel spilled out much information, about the location of the supercomputer, who they were recruiting, and how they were getting into the system undetected. Even though the Rebel gave all the information he knew, DC continued to torture him, and at one point the screams became truly haunting. Beltar: That’s ENOUGH! We got what we need! DC: FINE! But next time…Don’t interrupt me. Admiral, now that we know, keep the Rebel’s from entering the system for now. And Beltar, Alyin, and I will head back to the surface using the information, and combine it with what the two found on the surface. We might have to contact Kiriana about this, if he’s been looking in the city, that’s most likely the wrong area. We need to act fast. Admiral: Understood, I will notify Kiriana at once, Mr. Beltar, you are dismissed, you may return to your barracks. Beltar: Sir, yes sir. End [soNE Ep. XI] Farmland Triangulation by DaDudeDownDaStreet, on Flickr [soNE Ep. XI] Farmland Triangulation by DaDudeDownDaStreet, on Flickr [soNE Ep. XI] Farmland Triangulation by DaDudeDownDaStreet, on Flickr [soNE Ep. XI] Farmland Triangulation by DaDudeDownDaStreet, on Flickr [soNE Ep. XI] Farmland Triangulation by DaDudeDownDaStreet, on Flickr [soNE Ep. XI] Farmland Triangulation by DaDudeDownDaStreet, on Flickr [soNE Ep. XI] Farmland Triangulation by DaDudeDownDaStreet, on Flickr [soNE Ep. XI] Farmland Triangulation by DaDudeDownDaStreet, on Flickr [soNE Ep. XI] Farmland Triangulation by DaDudeDownDaStreet, on Flickr [soNE Ep. XI] Farmland Triangulation by DaDudeDownDaStreet, on Flickr [soNE Ep. XI] Farmland Triangulation by DaDudeDownDaStreet, on Flickr [soNE Ep. XI] Farmland Triangulation by DaDudeDownDaStreet, on Flickr Thanks for making it through this long episode build. Finally finished it, might edit the story tomorrow, but had to post it today because I won’t be home till 10:15PM PST, which leaves not much time. I tried to combine all of the ideas of this episode, interrogation, searching for the supercomputer, near the farmlands like in the episode topic, etc. More Images on my Photostream! Way too many extra pictures for me to embed in a spoiler, cause I'm really busy at the moment. The lighting was finally decent, but there is a huge crack in my photo studio now, so I’m going to have to get a new one…Thanks for stopping by and as always Comments and Criticism welcome! ~Beltar Edit: I got an OK by a judge to embed my photos afterwards. Edited May 4, 2016 by Commander Beltar Quote
ChiefPie Posted April 30, 2016 Posted April 30, 2016 This was a very nice part of the story and I look forward to more! Quote
Puvel Posted May 1, 2016 Posted May 1, 2016 Great story! Excellent pictures too, some very nice shots in there Quote
Lord Tyrus Posted May 1, 2016 Posted May 1, 2016 Fantastic build and story, I particularly like the ironic line: "Stay with me, Rebel scum". Quote
goatman461 Posted May 2, 2016 Posted May 2, 2016 nice looking trench and building. the door looks great and the colors work well together. that wall looks really good, too. hopefully the judges will look at your overall shots, probably should have included those in a spoiler since they show how nice of a build it is overall Quote
Kodan Black Posted May 2, 2016 Posted May 2, 2016 I like the farm with the trench and retaining wall and the moisture collectors. Very well done. Given how many of our builds feature interrogation, apparently the Empire loves interrogation! Quote
Junior Shark Posted May 2, 2016 Posted May 2, 2016 Mmm tasty groundwork. The trench and barricade look very good. Quote
Tariq j Posted May 2, 2016 Posted May 2, 2016 Nice build! I also really like the story and dialogue. Quote
MontyPython Posted May 4, 2016 Posted May 4, 2016 Great story, great build. Again, you made an excellent entry! Quote
LucasLaughing Posted May 4, 2016 Posted May 4, 2016 Great couple of scenes! As others have said, the trench and wall look really good, and I like the little scarecrow. It's also fun to see a medic in action - I want to see a battlefield surgery for your next build Quote
Forresto Posted May 5, 2016 Posted May 5, 2016 Awesome trench! I would love to see what you would do with a Hoth scene using that technique! Poor rebel, so many of us were lost in this operation! Great story i'm going to have read through your entire storyline since you have links to them at the top! Quote
Junior Shark Posted May 5, 2016 Posted May 5, 2016 Awesome trench! I would love to see what you would do with a Hoth scene using that technique! Mmm ditto. I'd absolutely love to see a Hoth trench built like that. Quote
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