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This is one of my entries for the CCC5 at classic-castle. Actually its something I did a few months ago, as a set piece for my next JT story, but have been holding for the contest. I'd appreciate any suggestions for improvements, so I can make them before officially entering it.

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/Athos/CC...gFarm/farm1.jpg

The whole agrarian gallery:

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=284924

Steve

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I also suggest you get some cows or bulls or something from Brickforge, just to make it a little more farm like ;-) It is very nice though, what an ugly mermaid! :-X :-D

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A viking farm is very original! *y* I'm only making a regular farm (mediveal, of course!) ;-)

I like it and I like the shore line/beach. The only suggestion I'd make is work on the building's roof. I like where you're going with the plants on the roof, but try using these:

2417.jpg

Weird, I'm giving my competition suggestions! :-D

;-)

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This is very nice! I like the field, with the guy reaping the grain, and the Viking post with skull and shield is a nice touch. *y* Nice addition with the mermaid, although in that pic the net makes her look like she has an eye patch. *wacko* :-P My only gripe is the grass on the roof, I think SirNadroj made a good suggestion. *sweet*

~Peace

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I like it but I think some parts are a bit sparse, especially the field itself. More plants perhaps? Ridges maybe? I think a rock or two or some wood on the beach would break up the beach as well. I agree with SirNadroj's piece suggestion; the plants on the roof look to obvious to me. While I think the mermaid is funny, it does move your creation into fantasy which seems a bit odd to me since you seem to otherwise be doing something realistic.

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