iamded Posted October 19, 2007 Posted October 19, 2007 (edited) This is a prequel to my Halloween vignette. I know, it's not Halloween yet, but I made my Halloween sig-fig and got carried away... X-D So, there I was, zombified, and having a nice stroll through the park. Little did I know, a skeleton sentry was doing the exact same thing! Only skelefied, not zombified... 8-| "Ah! A skeleton!" "Ah! A zombie!" I didn't want to look intimidating, so I hid my hammer behind my back. Being the meanie skeleton he was, he decided to charge at me! For no reason! X-O Of course, I had to use self-defence, and I just so happened to be carrying my hammer at the time... so I gave him a good whack! I sure taught him. I hope no-one heard the commotion though... My vig continues from here. Thanks for reading! Comments and criticism welcome. X-D ~Peace Edited October 19, 2007 by iamded Quote
Batbrick Posted October 19, 2007 Posted October 19, 2007 Being the meanie skeleton he was, he decided to charge at me! For no reason! X-O Of course, I had to use self-defence, and I just so happened to be carrying my hammer at the time... so I gave him a good whack! _______ This is terrible! >:-( Oh who am I kidding even as your enemy I must admit this is great! *sweet* I love how the skellie charged you for no reason, and that even a zombie can still have a stroll, that made me laugh! :-D Ah the good whack! You certaintly gave Hinckley a run for his money there! :-D Can't wait to see the actual vig! I Am FEAR Incarnate! *skull* Quote
LuxorV Posted October 19, 2007 Posted October 19, 2007 Nice and well thinked story, iamded *y* And great manga-like mallet 8- Quote
Hinckley Posted October 19, 2007 Posted October 19, 2007 X-D I love a good whack! Thanks for sharing. Nice brick built hammer *wub* Quote
Shadows Posted October 19, 2007 Posted October 19, 2007 Very nicely done: simple, direct, effective. I especially appreciate the cartoon effect of a character trying to hide something larger than themselves behind their back. You can just picture him rocking back on his heels a bit and whistling innocently, which is probably what got the skeleton so mad (they hate whistling, don't ask me how I know this, but it's a fact). *wacko* Hammer Time On! *y* Quote
Asuka Posted October 19, 2007 Posted October 19, 2007 A very nice vig, especially if you know about the second part. *y* Quote
iamded Posted October 19, 2007 Author Posted October 19, 2007 Thanks for all the feedback guys! I do appreciate it. *sweet* Btw, I'm always surprised by the way a zombie (or a skeleton, for that) can lift heavier objects than a man does; you know, they shouldn't even have muscles... Well, actually, the zombie virus, uh, reacted with my mechanical arm, spreading the super-strength all over my body. Hehe. :-P I'd also like to thank Hinckley, I'd never be whacking if it wasn't for you. :-D I'm not sure if that's a good thing or a bad thing... X-D ~Peace Quote
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