mediumsnowman Posted September 20, 2015 Posted September 20, 2015 Location:G10-Onix Tags: Building, Spying, Science If you have not already... Please read Part 1 before this build. Thanks! What the heck happened here?!? Maybe one of these computers still works... Sweet! Let's see if there's any surviving surveillance footage... Log date 759, this is Dr. Andrew Stanton. My research on scaling down the GATE drives is finally complete. Two top ranking Octan executives are arriving soon to witness the first test of my remarkable new technology. Wait, here they are now! This is Dr. Stanton signing off. Welcome gentlemen! I assume your journey was pleasant? Cut the pleasantries Stanton. We're here to see the GATE, not to socialize. We've invested a lot of time and money into your little project. It had better work. Very well. If you would just follow me down these steps... The work we have done here is really quite remarkable. We have downscaled the GATE drive to a point where it can effectively teleport a single minifigure anywhere, anytime. No longer will massive cores powered by tens of thousands barrels of Awesomenium be able to transport an entire cruiser into a general sector. No, this, operating on a fraction of the resources required, can send a single subject anywhere. The possibilities are limitless! Send a Special Forces agent behind enemy lines undetected? Of course! Your scientists need a sample from a far-off planet? Instead of sending an entire team, just beam them over there! Yes, yes, that's great, but does it actually work? See for yourself. One of our top pilots, Mr. Quinn Anderson, will be making a jump up to one of our stations orbiting Onix. And that is only the beginning... Let's do this! Capsule is locked in and ready. Final preparations are complete. We are go for launch in 10... 9... 8... 7... My life's work is nearly complete... What could go wrong? 6... 5... Sir? Something's wrong! What? What is it?! 4... 3... 2... Abort! ABORT! I can't! It's too far in the countdown! 1... ARGGG! What's going on! Shut it down! SHUT IT DOWN! What have you done!? *muffled explosion, screams, and sounds of crackling fire* Recording ends. Oh my... I have to get this back to HQ. Wait a second... I only saw one body! Where are... the rest of them? You're not going anywhere... TO BE CONTINUED! Thanks for taking the time to take a look at my build! I had a lot of fun building the lab and then smashing it up for the second part. I think this is one of my stronger builds so far, both on the building side and the storytelling side! Comments and criticism are welcome. Quote
rodiziorobs Posted September 20, 2015 Posted September 20, 2015 (edited) Woah! The ruined lab with all of the debris looks fantastic, and the story is is very good. What happens next week?! :thumbup: Nice inclusion of the Octansoft assistant, by the way. Edited September 20, 2015 by rodiziorobs Quote
Vedauwoo Posted September 20, 2015 Posted September 20, 2015 Awesome....very nice shallow focus! Quote
mrcp6d Posted September 20, 2015 Posted September 20, 2015 Very nice! The destroyed lab looks great and the GATE sled is well executed (and a cool idea!). Quote
LucasLaughing Posted September 21, 2015 Posted September 21, 2015 Great build - I love the yellow pipes on the wall, and the spilled beaker is a nice touch. And excellent use of CLAPPIE as well Quote
Jody Meyer Posted September 21, 2015 Posted September 21, 2015 what a great idea using a video feed to tell the story, great build Quote
Kai NRG Posted September 21, 2015 Posted September 21, 2015 Very nice lab, the smash-up is great and there are some neat details to look at too! Quote
SpacerSteve Posted September 22, 2015 Posted September 22, 2015 Great story. I like the wrecked lab. The footage of the accident is awesome. Looks like Dr. Arvan infiltrated Octan. Quote
halixon Posted September 23, 2015 Posted September 23, 2015 OMG Is it wrong that i got chills while reading this? I can't wait for Part 3!!!! :thumbup: Quote
Andromedas Gates Posted September 24, 2015 Posted September 24, 2015 The judges awarded you 5 points. Quote
LittleJohn Posted September 24, 2015 Posted September 24, 2015 Excellent work! The wrecked lab looks great Looking forward to the next part Quote
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