Isundir Posted July 29, 2015 Posted July 29, 2015 (edited) My first Freebuild for Lands of Roawia (and my second attempt at an interior). Undying - Prologue, Part 1 -Remote Monastery somewhere in Garheim- "Sir you wanted to see us?" The old commander looked up from his documents. "Raziel, Kain good you've both been summoned." Raziel looked displeased. "Sir with all due respect, he's just a greenhorn, he can't possibl..." "That is enough Raziel" the commander interrupted, however Raziel slammed his fist on the table "But Sir..." exasperated the commander once again interrupted "I SAID THAT IS ENOUGH! Now then, you've both been dispatched to our excavation site in the Lorean Desert, you will leave immediately." "Can you give any more details concerning our mission Sir?" Kain asked. The commander frowned as he contemplated what to tell them. "The Chaplain leading the excavation has requested immediate reinforcements as the current Paladins present at the site are incapable of suppressing the undead, now leave and make haste!" I should mention that I'm not actually a native English speaker or writer so scribbling down this little story was pretty hard, if I made any mistakes feel free to correct me. Edited August 14, 2015 by Isundir Quote
Dazz Posted July 29, 2015 Posted July 29, 2015 I like both your build and the accompanying story. Quote
Captain Dee Posted July 29, 2015 Posted July 29, 2015 The interior is wonderful. I like the combination of colors and tiled walls, and the decorated windows look nice. The floor, furniture and other details look fine too. Best of all, it looks like it would work well depicting a wide range of time periods, and it has an inviting mood. Your English is excellent. It might not be perfect (whose is?) but it's better than many native English-speakers. Keep it up on both counts! Quote
Schreeuwwitje Posted July 29, 2015 Posted July 29, 2015 Nice MOC and interesting story. I like the figures in the wall! Had the same problem with English, but yours is good enough ^^ Quote
Jorrith Posted July 30, 2015 Posted July 30, 2015 The story is great! I also know it's very hard to find the right words sometimes, but you really did ok! The build is really nice, good wall technique and i like the scene. Quote
KristofBD Posted August 9, 2015 Posted August 9, 2015 Excellent moc! Love the walls and the floor. Quote
LittleJohn Posted August 12, 2015 Posted August 12, 2015 Superb build! The wall texturing and windows look great and I really like the floor The bookshelf is a nice touch too Quote
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