Upgraded Unicorn! ( Unicorn Mark II )

[Joey Lock]

So here it is better Upgraded Version!

So it has the New Hull and New Bow, New Yards and one new Mast *sweet*

Im actually pretty Quite proud of it :'-)

Thanks for all the Advice!

I couldnt add on advice from Mr Tiber and Hairy Ruben ( Make the Hull bigger and Space out the gun hacths to 4 studs than 2 )

Since it would be to late and I would get confused.

..Hmm but it would Lower the cost...

Anywho here it is. X-D

Edit: Also Mr Tiber What did you meen when you stated add fences?

Edit: The two bottom Pics are new ones

Edited August 19, 2007 by phred

[El Bucanero]

It's already looking better Mr Lock!

Edit: Also Mr Tiber What did you meen when you stated add fences?

I meant this:

Might increase the crew's safety ;-) .

Like I said, looking better but there's still a bit of room to improve.

You could make the masts differ in length. It would also be more realistic.

Currently your masts are equal in length.

I always make the mizzen mast the lowest, the main mast the highest and the fore-mast a bit longer thatn the mizzen mast. And that bow sprit really should be a bit longer!

I was also wondering if you're plannig to add a top deck?

The front is looking better, but still blocky. Does LDD give you these slopes?:

Perhaps you could experiment with those a little.

If the don't have them, perhaps you could try normal slopes.

Too bad about the distance between the distance between gunports, but I understand.

I hope that helps.

Other than that it's good!

So, I was wondering, how much does it cost now, and are you going to buy it?

Mr Tiber

Edited August 18, 2007 by Mr Tiber

[Opproperaar]

I have one more suggestion, and it might prove easy to do, you could make the masts slender as they go up, same with the bowsprit and perhaps change the colour of the masts like in this picture, that would also make it look better. I'll include a picture to clarify what I mean ;-)

Other than that, keep it up, it has improved a lot *y*

[Joey Lock]

It's already looking better Mr Lock!

I meant this:

Might increase the crew's safety ;-) .

Like I said, looking better but there's still a bit of room to improve.

You could make the masts differ in length. It would also be more realistic.

Currently your masts are equal in length.

I always make the mizzen mast the lowest, the main mast the highest and the fore-mast a bit longer thatn the mizzen mast. And that bow sprit really should be a bit longer!

I was also wondering if you're plannig to add a top deck?

The front is looking better, but still blocky. Does LDD give you these slopes?:

Perhaps you could experiment with those a little.

If the don't have them, perhaps you could try normal slopes.

Too bad about the distance between the distance between gunports, but I understand.

I hope that helps.

Other than that it's good!

So, I was wondering, how much does it cost now, and are you going to buy it?

Mr Tiber

Well I dont know how much it costs because my LDD is in Stupid offline mode and it wont go online.

Ive tryed turning off all firewalls and it dont work.. :-/

But anyway i may get the Black Sea Barracuda from somewhere in a while I dont know though..

[ZeekyBoogeyDoog]

The newer version is much improved from the older one *y* !

I agree with Mr. Tiber's and Hairy Ruben's suggestions; they've covered everything I would have said. I would suggest making the masts yellow if its available, that is the most historically accurate color to use.

However, you've done a great job, and keep building!

[Capn Frank]

Hey Joey,

Does this new version have some Tumblehome effect?

P

[Mister Phes]

The bow still looks too stubby...

[Errorist]

I like this ship but it would look so much better with more slender and longer bowsprit and masts ;-)

just a suggestion though the ship looks good the way it s now ;-)

Edited August 23, 2007 by Errorist