Toa Velox

No, no, no, no, no. Gelu is in no way a Hordika clone. The Hordika were, IMO, horrible. But yet, Gelu is my favorite [tied with Ackar] Glatorian Legend. He looks good, even if he is an Inika clone [which most sets are now days]. I relate Gelu more to Tahu Nuva. Look at Tahu's Magma Blades, and Gelu's blades. They look quite alike. The only similarity between Gelu and Nuju Hordika would be the bendy weapon. Just my two cents.

Well, uh, I already gave that super long reply on BZP, so I'll just summarize my thoughts here using bullet points. :P -It's definitely one of the best stories I've read. -Your description was magnificent. -Your using of Vezon was supurb. You were able to make him insane and give a comedic tone to the story without making it too unrealistic or just plain stupid. Many people often create things that just, to be frank, sound quite stupid. And yet, even the hugging of the tree, or counting his steps was extremely well done, IMO. -The plot was well thought-out. -The title was excellent. As I said in my longer review on BZP, a title is perhaps the most important thing in a story. It makes someone click the topic in the first place. It grabs the reader's attention. And this title was about as eye-grabbing as a title can be. Just seeing the word "Flux" [which, I'm sure most people don't even know what it means] is enough to make one want to click the topic. -As I said before, you described Vezon and his personality perfectly. Insane characters are quite fun to write about, aren't they? Anyway, enough of that. Well done again. ^^

Though I'd might as well join. If you go on BZP, you probably know me [i'm Toa Velox, of course]. So, yeah, I was bored and Nuju Metru wanted me to join so we can take over the forums together be awesome like that. I suppose I should tell a little about myself, shouldn't I? Well, my favorite LEGO theme is definitely BIONICLE. I'm an POBZPC on BZP. I love to write and review other stories, as well as review sets and MOCs [and I used to MOC, but I don't much any more -- though I love to review MOCs, and I'm known on BZP for my super long posts (often over 1000 words)]. Because of my love for writing, I created a BIONICLE-based Writing forum [which is linked in my profile, and probably will be linked in my sig some time as well] which just opened. It's Co-Owned/Founded by myself and Nuju Metru. It's basically a place to just post your stories and get a good review, because if anyone here visits the library on BZP, you know how few stories get the posts they deserve. ... That's about it.

Oh hey, Nuju. Me and you will conquer this site. become as awesome as we are on BZP. :P Geez, so many BZP members here. Kinda cool, actually. Anywho, before I welcome people, I suppose I should make an introduction topic myself, shouldn't I?