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My review (hidden for minor-moderate spoilers); *Yami*

Hi guys sorry I haven't been around some of the more important keys on my laptop's keyboard broke so I've had to wait for a USB replacement But I'll get back to work on designing characters.

Not bad bit short and I think Vorox's stinger breaking off is the most violent thing we've seen in Bionicle. *Yami*

Oh BTW I meant to point out the Vostra was meant to be the Vulcanus trainee's name and I hadn't worked on the Tesara Glatorian's name yet must've not said it clearly enough but ah well no harm done. *Yami*

2G 3A |||| 1G 3A 3G 2A *Yami*

1 Glat 1 Agori 1G 2A 1G 3A 2 1G 4A 1G 5A 2G 1A 2G 2A 2G 3A 1 2G 4A 2G 5A 3G 1A 3G 2A 3 3G 3A 3G 4A 3G 5A 4G 1A 4G 2A 4G 3A 4G 4A 4G 5A 5G 1A 5G 2A 5G 3A 5G 4A 5G 5A 6G 1A 6G 2A 6G 3A 6G 4A 6G 5A 7G 1A 7G 2A 7G 3A 7G 4A 7G 5A [Ha ha] *Yami*

Yeah I'd say he'd probably have a hardtime with any vehicles in the Undrground due to different tech seeing as Bara-Magna's stuff would probably run similarly which is why he can master it so quickly (Plus the fact he's basically a genius at the stuff) and the Exo skeleton isnt going to be easy to work. *Yami*

No as in if he steps into an UNFAMILIAR vehicle of any type he could master it in a minute not EVERY vehicle in a minute probably should edit tha to clear it up. *Yami*

Okay I've finally decided on a name for the Vulcanus Glatorian it's Vostra one ofthe names Alchemyst thre around. And I've also made another Glatorian this one from Tesara and a vehicle specialist which is why he's a bit under-armoured. Description:Considered the greatest Vehicle prodigy in years able to master any type of vehicle in less than a minute he has been the champion of the Vehicle Division of the Grand Tournament 5 conscutive times though after the destruction of Arena Magna he has since only been able to polish his machines though in the Bara-Magna Underground he is thrilled to seek out new types of transport and machinery. Personality:Think of the Tenth Doctor from DR.WHO. Tribe:Tesara I'm not sure what type of vehicle I will make for him I was thinking something similar to an Exo-Toa that he finds in the underground. *Yami*

VILLAINS: Ecto-Concept Art Vertea-Concept art / parasite consultant Bfahome - MOC: MIND Bfahome - MOC: flying propeller scout thing (?) Alchy - MOC: Vorox thing [shortly] Yami-MOC:Shapeshifting,Ignika hunting antagonist (backstory in development) HEROES: The Dor / Antrozek: Ex-raider Bfahome - MOC: Glatorian from Tajun Alchy - MOC: Teborus from Iconox. Yami-MOC:Vulcanus Veteran Trainee(pics when brickshelf sorts things out seeing as I can't upload anything for some reason) *Yami*

Okay finally got the time to show a pic of my Glatorian but for some reason Brickshelf and Maj are down so all I can show now is a bit more detail into his backstory and personality. Quote:"For Years I have been pushed aside for Younger Warriors like Malum and others with more experience like Ackar,The agori may have given up on me but I have not given up on them" Tribe:Vulcanus Description:An experienced warrior with a record of time as a Trainee without a promotion,He came to Vulcanus shortly after the Arena system was formed and grew a freindly rivalry with Ackar who was both a mentor and freind.He however had no patience for people like Strakk who he more than often challenged for no reason only to be bested by his constant rule bending. He was always being overtaken by Younger and Wiser Glatorian and he has finally had enough and with his new task of aiding Mata-Nui hes ready to prove he's not a lost cause. Personality:Gruff and Solemn at times but very polite to anyone and very loyal to anyone but if made angry or if his pride or freinds are at stake he will fight with unpredictable ferocity. Has an intense dislike for the Ex-Raider Glatorian. No name yet but working on it *Yami*

I'm almost finishd on my Glatorian however I've had to change his Tribe seeing as I decided to keep the Trainee Glatorian who was from Tajun over my Tesara Glatorian but seeing as we already have a Tajun Glatorian I wanted to do either Vulcanus or Tesara some justice and I decided to eep the backstory the same but change the tribe so I'm kinda stuck seeing as I built two Glaorian templates fairly similar to the original one from Tajun and I decided that the one I liked the most would be picked and get the Weapons I had planned so I'll have decided soon and have pics up soon. *YamI*

That sounds like a good deal I'll probably keep the Tajun Trainee trying to prove his worth over the Rookie Trainee trying to find his place. *Yami*

i'm working on the Trainee moc's though It may take slightly longer to build seeing as I'll probably need a couple of extra pieces from Vastus and Kiina so I'll see if I can place an order and get the sets tomorrow. So far the two Mocs are looking fairly good the Tesara Rookie is Metru Green/Zaktan Light Green fairly scrawny but that's probably going to work better as he is a rookie and hasn't had as much time to build up any "Muscle". The Tajun Veteran Trainee on the other hand is fairly bulky and Metru-Blue/Trans-Blue and that looks quite good but I'll probably switch out for standard Light-Blue. And one of these characters will probably end up being cut though I'll decide once I've starded working on the backstory but so far The Rookie is Looking like the more likely one to be cut. *Yami*

I have 2 Glatorian Ideas up and ready to go: Tribe:Tesara Description:A young rookie only just accepted as a Trainee and trying to find his place on Bara-Magna which isn't easy due to influences such as the Ex-Raider glatorian(Name Please?) leading him astray.But he means well and is determined to show he can be as good as the Primary and Secondary Glatorian Tribe:Tajun Description:A Gruff Trainee who has attempted to gain a Secondary Or Primary slot as a Glatorian but has been pushed aside again and again, despite this he is very loyal to his allys and despite his demeanour polite to even his enemies although he disagrees with Mata-Nui at times he respects and reveres him knowing he means best. I'm not at all good with names so if both or either of these two get picked for the final group you guys can choose the names *Yami*