AncientEngine

This an entry to the Septemberfest contest! I had to rush my entry a lot, my schedule of work was pretty unbalanced. Comments and critc is welcome!

Thank you :D I´m really glad you liked it and commented, without you, I would probably stopped!

Thanks, and as written: the rest of the series in the set on Flickr!

Thank you! I made the mohawk myself, but the credit goes to Jasbrick. I took a classic hairpiece and cut the sides down. After that, I sanded it a bit. THE END! :D

Link to Set on Flickr The ceiling breaks down. That man with the blue clothes, Felix, jumps from the upper stage down. "Where is Jeff?" "What?" " WHERE IS JEFF?" I hear myself whisper: "H-h-he is the-r-r-re..." I point to the rubbish that fell down on the mecha. Only a leg let me point out that Jeff is there. Blood oozes through the rocks. "Jeff..", whines Mike. "NOOO!" The silents after that is unsettling. I hear them lament. After a while Felix, who picked me up, draws his knife. He takes a pipe and cuts it. He takes another one and puts them together, forms a cross. He stacks it in the rubbish at the place where Jeff rests. Mike snuffles. We walk away, slowly, everything is in slow motion. Something behind me chrashes. I run, hear them behind me. This part of a series, which is built up on a 8x8 plate. Comments and critic would be great! Thanks in advance!

Every epidsode in one set on Flickr! Mike, that guy with the pistols, shoots. The other man in blue jumps on some rubbish and gets up to the mecha. It shoots. Blood around the place. Our third man´s arm is covered in blood, let´s say the rest of it. His shotgun rolls over the floor, with a hand on the trigger. Slowly that beast upside gets weaker by every shot in its body. A big cut -one of its legs is not in contact with the body anymore. Parts of the mecha fall down. It´s dead. This part of a series, which is built up on a 8x8 plate. Comments and critic would be great! Thanks in advance!

Yes, it´s a gas mask. Thank you :D

After the war between the company and the space market, uproars came up daily. Unhappiness, rage and hate made a new unit with it´s flaws, but they grew and now, they live. Assassins, bounty hunters and simply bad guys joined. The worse: The War Has Just Began. Comments and critic would be great! Thanks in advance!

#1 -Hidden #2 -Chrashed #3 -Attacked #4 -Searched #5 -Escaped #6 -Damaged #7 -Linked #8 -Suprised So we walk through the corridors and arrive at a subway. His friends are there also. They talk about me and what they will do now. "We´re gonna kill him!" "No, we will not". So they argue, but suddenly they stop. I eavesdrop carefully, some pebbles fall down, I look above and see that damn mecha. This part of a series, which is built up on a 8x8 plate. Comments and critic would be great! Thanks in advance!

Yes, it was meant to look like a mini-scale city.

Thanks for the critic. I probably won´t do this because it would take longer to post the actual topic and would be harder to do. You said not much is going on there. The next two vignettes will rock your socks off :P

#1 -Hidden #2 -Chrashed #3 -Attacked #4 -Searched #5 -Escaped #6 -Damaged #7 -Linked Everything is quiet, I walk through the tunnel and hear something that cracks in front of me. I walk on an suddenly he jumps out of niche and takes the knife. "Who are you?" I´m too suprised to answer. This part of a series, which is built up on a 8x8 plate. Comments and critic would be great! Thanks in advance!

#1 -Hidden #2 -Chrashed #3 -Attacked #4 -Searched #5 -Escaped #6 -Damaged Some very weird wires are around me. I take the another newspaper to stop the bleeding of my arm. It gets a bit brighter, the wires and pipes are around me. This part of a series, which is built up on a 8x8 plate. Comments and critic would be great! Thanks in advance!

#1 -Hidden #2 -Chrashed #3 -Attacked #4 -Searched #5 -Escaped This tunnel never ends. It´s complete black, you can´t see anyting. I find some very old newspaper, not very interesting. I remember the city above my head, when something explodes very loud. I go on, but this tunnel looks like it never ends. This part of a series, which is built up on a 8x8 plate. Comments and critic would be great! Thanks in advance!