listen mate, you uploaded this on to the internet to recieve some comments and criticism. well lets be quite clear, and i aint gonna beat around no bush. this is very bad. nothing about it makes any sense. the shape is blocky, the colours random, the idea not particulary original. well i say that, but to be fair you have a reasonably original concept possibly, it is just a shame that your execution of the concept (possibly, because still not 100% sure what the concept was...), was hampered by a total lack of either design or construction skill.
in short this is what you might considered 'a fail', in fact i would even go as far as to say 'epic fail', but there is nothing 'epic' about this so called MOC. so lets just leave it at a 'fail'.