TTROOPER Posted April 2, 2014 It all started by the border of Kaliphlin by a small watchtower, when Thokul brought the sad news to his brother. "So brother what brings you to my humble dwelling, do you need me to guard you caravan from pirates again?" "No I fear that is not why I have come to you, I come bearing more depressing news. Our father was killed yesterday fighting dark forces along the border only 10 miles from here." "No.....NO!! no..........." "Yes I am afraid so, but I fear for you life to, if these forces could wipe out an entire legion your garrison will not last any longer I suggest you evacuate and meet up with the res of our fathers army the 5th legion I believe" "Let them come I will avenge our father and rid all of Historica of these creatures!" "Jerrik! Listen to me! There is a time to fight and a time to wait, now we most wait. I will not allow you to get your self killed, we must gather our forces if we are to retaliate and I cannot lead the remaining legions on my own." "You have always been the smart one brother but I vow never to let another army, or person fall to these monsters" "Good, finally some commonsense in that thick skull of yours" "WHY YOU!" And with that Jerrick through his sword aside and attempted to tackle his brother who simple batted him away with a magical blast, then Jerrik stood and admitted defeat, and instructed his men to load anything needed into the carts, destroy the tower and anything that could be used against them and prepare to leave. Some extra shots. Sorry for the bad backgrounds, I don't really know how to edit them:P comments and criticism welcome:) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kabel Posted April 2, 2014 Hi there, this is definetely a nice build and and interesting story. I really like how created those oriental arches. As for background, just get a big sheat of white paper and pose your stuff against it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gunman Posted April 2, 2014 Small but pretty tower there... Lovely sharp photos. Just hang a white bed linen next time and you will be perfect. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
HammerBro Posted April 2, 2014 I like the story and those are some nice figs. Cool build! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SkaForHire Posted April 2, 2014 Great work, I am looking forward to where the story is going! White cardboard / poster board or a sheet will allow you to avoid future faucets in your pictures Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gideon Posted April 2, 2014 Very nice build and Kaliphlin minfigs I too would advice you to put something behind the build as previous comments already have stated. Other than that, I think your lighting of the build is quite good and definitely better than if you were inside or using a flash As there is plenty of light outside also on a cloudy day, it might be possible to eliminate the shadows in the build even more if you did the photography entirely in the shadow. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scaevola Posted April 2, 2014 Nice build. Good job on the landscaping as well Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lord Vladivus Posted April 2, 2014 Great work! Nice story! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TheUtilityBelt Posted April 2, 2014 I actually like the backgrounds, and I love the door! The story is nice as well. Can't wait to see more of your builds! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
soccerkid6 Posted April 3, 2014 Excellent tower the architecture looks good and I like the landscape as well Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
robuko Posted April 3, 2014 Nice start! I like the protruding parts of the build, and great door! Nice trees too. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DrColossus Posted April 3, 2014 I really like the use of the telescope part for the staff! I might have to borrow that for my own magic-workers... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Infernum Posted April 3, 2014 Great build and figs! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
qiadris Posted April 3, 2014 Great start, that's one nice tower! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
