AoM: Barracks Phase 1

[Jakon]

In a small village in Mitgardia, an old veteran and a fresh recruit are stationed as guards in the town, however, the Veteran soon discovers that his comrade is woefully bad with a sword, and decides to give him some lessons. So, together they venture out and make for themselves a little sparring area.

entry into Age of Mitgardia 1 by Jakon B.Rytight, on Flickr

entry into Age of Mitgardia 2 by Jakon B.Rytight, on Flickr

entry into Age of Mitgardia 3 by Jakon B.Rytight, on Flickr

entry into Age of Mitgardia 4 by Jakon B.Rytight, on Flickr

entry into Age of Mitgardia 5 by Jakon B.Rytight, on Flickr

entry into Age of Mitgardia 6 by Jakon B.Rytight, on Flickr

entry into Age of Mitgardia 7 by Jakon B.Rytight, on Flickr

entry into Age of Mitgardia 8 by Jakon B.Rytight, on Flickr

[Gunman]

Nice minifig posing dude :)

[Jakon]

Thanks! It took quite a while to get right.

[HammerBro]

Wonderful posing! But, I think adding a little more pale colored vegetation/landscaping would help a lot. Also a defined border would make it look cleaner and more polished. Good job!

[Jakon]

So, do I need to wait before I post phase 2?

[soccerkid6]

Nice start to AoM, Jakon. I like the fig posing and the rockwork looks good

I'd suggest adding some small drifts to your snow, and putting some small plates/plate round, small tiles in the path for the future builds

[DrColossus]

I like the rocks a lot, and the posing is dynamic and well thought-out. For a suggestion (and I only say this because I hear it all the time myself), some smaller plates/1x1s scattered around would help to break up the blockiness of the landscape. As it is though, it makes sense that the are where they're fighting would be muddy.

[Jakon]

Thanks for the feed back, and again, do I need to wait before posting phase 2?

[soccerkid6]

Thanks for the feed back, and again, do I need to wait before posting phase 2?

Actually, you never need to wait to start the next phase. The actual 'judging' if you want to call it that, takes place after you complete all 3 phases.

It's just you want to listen to advice from Phase I and II builds so you can improve the builds and you go through the phases.