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AoM: Archery Phase I

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Two young Mitgardians practicing there archery skills in there spare time in the south of Mitgardia.

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looking rather nice already. I'd add some more variation on the ground though, smaller plates, more vegetation maybe the one or dark tan plate or so ...

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I like the target hung from the tree :thumbup: Nice pose on the guy sitting on the ground. As kabel said a little more variation on the ground with plates and plants would look good. Also you could add a red 1x2 plate to the back of the target so the center hole in the target is red :classic:

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Looks great! Like the figs and three, but indeed there could be more plants or some snow. But, great work!

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I have updated my build. It is still not perfect, but it is in the right direction?

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That does look better, Purr :thumbup: The path to the target looks better and I like that you filled in the center of it. Keep paying attention to suggestions and you'll be a great MOCer in no time :classic:

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Ooh, much better!I agree with soccerkid6, just follow the suggestions, and you should do great! One minor nitpick is pictures, they are a little blurry.

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Nice vignette (the last picture), I like the target and the tree!

As mpoh98 pointed out, the photography needs some more attention in the future to take your MOC presenting to the next level.

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Thanks for the comments and in a short time I learned already so much about mocing. The Photograhpy is a point that I definitely want to improve next time

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A nice little moc for sure! Great to see that you pay attention to the tips given to you!

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