Sisco Posted December 21, 2010 Posted December 21, 2010 Chapter One. Nick looked to his right. He saw Albert, who Nick had pulled out of the Baseball Stadium two days after It had happened. Nick looked to his left, to see two Tourists from Arkansas, a father and son team, with the Son being named Tyler and the Father Eric. Nick had pulled them out of the rubble that had been the STL arch the day It had happened. A motley crew, thought Nick, as they continued to walk down the deserted road. I wonder what will happen to us... With those Things walking around... We'll make it. We'll get out of this city, and into the Country. Maybe head to Arkansas. This is going to be a continuing story, so stick around for more installments! Quote
RoryoCox Posted December 21, 2010 Posted December 21, 2010 It has grabbed my attention so far. The storyline looks good so far and I will be looking forward to the next installment. Quote
Sisco Posted December 27, 2010 Author Posted December 27, 2010 You're the only one . Unless there's anyone else who likes this enough for me to make more, I'm not going to. Thanks for being the only one among the many forums I posted this to to actually post a reply, Burman. Quote
The Soup Nazi Posted December 27, 2010 Posted December 27, 2010 Looks great! One thing I'd consider is making a better 'backstory', because it's sort of plain right now. Quote
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