AncientEngine Posted June 18, 2010 Posted June 18, 2010 I run, hear them behind me. Something behind me crashes. Some bits of a building fly around, one ripps a wall next to me. I lean against a wall, and stop to breath. I can hear them come closer. I turn around and shoot it. The whole building behind me chrashes when it attacks, I run. This part of a series, which is built up on a 8x8 plate. Comments and critic would be great! Thanks in advance! Quote
ProducePrincess Posted June 18, 2010 Posted June 18, 2010 The vig is a little bleak for my tastes but i do like that MG mount on the baricade. Quote
LuxorV Posted June 18, 2010 Posted June 18, 2010 Nice vig, and very suspence-full description. Keep it up with the rest of the series Quote
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