blueandwhite Posted November 13, 2008 Posted November 13, 2008 With so many amazing entries already pouring in I couldn't help but feel a bit out of the loop. Well, there's a remedy for everything. My first entry is a Vignette. A Crown Knight finds himself outmatched by a trio of primate invaders. Feedback is appreciated. Quote
Guss Posted November 13, 2008 Posted November 13, 2008 haha nice vignette, I love how the knight looks so angry ! ^^ Quote
I Scream Clone Posted November 13, 2008 Posted November 13, 2008 Very nice work! I wont rave on about all the cool things as you want critique The green and light blue flooring doesn't do much for the overall moc. Also the use of the occasional blue cylinder detracts from the primary colours a little. Also the tan columns stick out a little too much with the grey/sand green motif. Just my thoughts, I still really like this moc a lot, hope this helps. Quote
Norro Posted November 13, 2008 Posted November 13, 2008 Very nice! Especially for a first venture into a new scale/style... also nice to see a fresh concept employed. God Bless, Nathan Quote
blueandwhite Posted November 14, 2008 Author Posted November 14, 2008 Very nice work! I wont rave on about all the cool things as you want critique The green and light blue flooring doesn't do much for the overall moc. Also the use of the occasional blue cylinder detracts from the primary colours a little. Also the tan columns stick out a little too much with the grey/sand green motif.Just my thoughts, I still really like this moc a lot, hope this helps. Thank you for the critique. I'm always interested in constructive criticism and yours was very helpful. I intend to consider some of the things you said when constructing the second great hall in my castle. I agree that the sand green and blue don't necessarily go together particularly well, so I'll try to avoid the combination in the future. Building vignettes is fairly new to me so your comments were very useful. The cylinders on the back wall are actually a repeating pattern of dark/light blue. I suspect that the effect is diminished by the crowded nature of the vignette. Perhaps the pattern should have been sand green/tan instead. Hopefully my next work turns out a bit better . Quote
Dennimator Posted November 14, 2008 Posted November 14, 2008 Very nice MOC, but I suggest that you use bigger pics next time. Quote
NewRight Posted November 14, 2008 Posted November 14, 2008 Fantastic! So many great details and monkeys to go along. Wonderful. Quote
GC8Monkey Posted November 14, 2008 Posted November 14, 2008 Ha ha! Poor Knight. The Monkies got the better of him. I really like your design and how all the elements draw your eyes up. Plus, the stacked furniture is great. Exacty how I would imagine how an angry knight would try to get at the Monkies on the chandelier. Grab whatever he could in the room and stack it up. just for the Monkies. Quote
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