Still Raindrop Posted November 11, 2008 B-V-10B All right, so I'm just starting to build some MOCs that I'm comfortable with sharing. The first one is a small fountain: Comments, constructive criticism, and thoughts would be appreciated. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
WesternOutlaw Posted November 11, 2008 Very nice design. I'm not too good at these types of builds, so I esp. appreciate the work they take. This would make a great focal point/center for a park or larger estate. Some classic cypress trees nearby would look great. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kakihara Smile Posted November 11, 2008 It is a nice design. I tend to try and simplify things instead of make them more complex. So, I like this one because it is not made out of a bijillion little tiny parts. I wonder if it could be simpler and still have that look though. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Still Raindrop Posted November 11, 2008 Thanks for the comments! I'm glad you like it. It probably could be simpler; just not with the pieces I had And TheBrickster, that's a great idea. I was fiddling around with the idea of a park (as evidenced by the bench in the background that didn't turn out nearly as well as I had hoped it would), but was unsure how to expand it. I need to look into getting some cypress trees, as all I have are the pines/firs. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guss Posted November 11, 2008 that's a nice little fountain, I love how you used the flower ^^ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Badsneaker Posted November 11, 2008 Looks great Mariko, simple yet elegant! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Klaus-Dieter Posted November 12, 2008 (edited) Very nice MOC, Mariko! It reminds me a bit of a marriage - supposably because of the white colors. Great design! Very well done! Klaus-Dieter Edited November 12, 2008 by Klaus-Dieter Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lord Santos Posted November 12, 2008 The fontain design is great but i think that the water should be more on top... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Still Raindrop Posted November 12, 2008 The fontain design is great but i think that the water should be more on top... How would I go about doing that? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Minifig Lecturer Posted November 12, 2008 How would I go about doing that? I agree with Lord Santos, the water level could be raised 1 or 2 plates higher. Also I think the fountain should be 1 or 2 studs wider from all angles, i.e. more water. However in saying that it is still a very neat lil moc good job for sure Share this post Link to post Share on other sites