Mr Greeble Posted July 4, 2016 Posted July 4, 2016 (edited) Location: Marphacia: B05 Tags: Spaceship Previously: Part I Part II Part III Part IV Part V Part VI Part VII Part VIII Part IX Log of Agent G: The Rookie and I have been able to book passage on a cargo ship, and we rest, and she sleeps peacefully, but I once again, am plagued by visions... "Find the Cobwebs..." Comments and Criticism apreciated, especially because I don't usually build microscale or spaceships. Edited July 4, 2016 by Mr Greeble Quote
SpacerSteve Posted July 4, 2016 Posted July 4, 2016 Nice micro freighter! I like how you have the cargo containers in the side. Quote
Dannylonglegs Posted July 6, 2016 Posted July 6, 2016 Nice build! The shape is rather simple, but overall effective. It makes sense that a space freighter would have a simple shape, afterall. The crates are a nice touch! The front seems a little bare. It might benefit from a trans tile of somekind. Interesting continuation of the story. I see how it's joining into the greater MANTIS Story at the moment. Very cool. ~Insectoid Aristocrat Quote
Mr Greeble Posted July 6, 2016 Author Posted July 6, 2016 (edited) Nice micro freighter! I like how you have the cargo containers in the side. Thank you! I felt like I wanted to have them showing. Nice build! The shape is rather simple, but overall effective. It makes sense that a space freighter would have a simple shape, afterall. The crates are a nice touch! The front seems a little bare. It might benefit from a trans tile of somekind. Interesting continuation of the story. I see how it's joining into the greater MANTIS Story at the moment. Very cool. ~Insectoid Aristocrat Thanks! I didn't feel the need to go really fancy for a freighter, yeah. I do have trans tiles there, but LDD doesn't show them well. They kinda can be seen in the first picture. Believe me, this story has been in the planning for a while... Agent G is more involved in M.A.N.T.I.S. affairs then it might seem... Edited July 6, 2016 by Mr Greeble Quote
Dannylonglegs Posted July 6, 2016 Posted July 6, 2016 Thank you! I felt like I wanted to have them showing. Thanks! I didn't feel the need to go really fancy for a freighter, yeah. I do have trans tiles there, but LDD doesn't show them well. They kinda can be seen in the first picture. Believe me, this story has been in the planning for a while... Agent G is more involved in M.A.N.T.I.S. affairs then it might seem... I was looking for a tile there, as it looked like there should be one there, but the LDD must really not want to make that part visible. I can tell. The best stories are those which have been well planned and have a good pay-off, so I can't wait to see what the Web we Weave has in store for us. ~Insectoid Aristocrat Quote
Mr Greeble Posted July 7, 2016 Author Posted July 7, 2016 I was looking for a tile there, as it looked like there should be one there, but the LDD must really not want to make that part visible. I can tell. The best stories are those which have been well planned and have a good pay-off, so I can't wait to see what the Web we Weave has in store for us. ~Insectoid Aristocrat Web we Weave is just SpacerSteve's name for it. It's larger than that... Quote
Mr Greeble Posted July 7, 2016 Author Posted July 7, 2016 The judges awarded you 3 points. Thank you, o benevolent judges. Quote
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