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Mission: Training Day

Tags: Arium Major, Kawashita

Agent Raven has given me orders to commit to proper training for any situation that may lie ahead for myself and my crew members under my command. I have been sent to a dojo for training in the old ways. I will be forced to become a warrior, not to kill or fight all the time but to learn the focus needed to keep Kawashita strong.

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I bow to you, master, please teach me the old ways

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I learned to use the sword

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I learned to clear my mind and see my path

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I leave a new fig, ready to bring glory to Kawashita

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As a judge I now look a bit closer to builds and I want to give you some advice.

I like this build. It have a nice feel/atmosphere. Esthetically, I think it's one of your best but it could have gotten a higher score if you would have had better photos. A few tips would be:

* use a proper background (a roll-down curtain is a simple solution and roll up nicely)

* It may need better light or after adjustment in a program. The colurs are a bit dim. Compare the first images which are matte with the last which is brighter.

* Brush or rinse off the dust from the base plate and bricks.

Hope you don't mind me saying this. It's a good build, It's just a shame it's not presented as good as it could have been.

Posted

As a judge I now look a bit closer to builds and I want to give you some advice.

I like this build. It have a nice feel/atmosphere. Esthetically, I think it's one of your best but it could have gotten a higher score if you would have had better photos. A few tips would be:

* use a proper background (a roll-down curtain is a simple solution and roll up nicely)

* It may need better light or after adjustment in a program. The colurs are a bit dim. Compare the first images which are matte with the last which is brighter.

* Brush or rinse off the dust from the base plate and bricks.

Hope you don't mind me saying this. It's a good build, It's just a shame it's not presented as good as it could have been.

I am happy to get the advice. Still working on a proper photo area for mocs as I would agree the lighting is tough. The dust is also something I need to get better with. It is a constant war in the space I have my Lego in.

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