[Challenge 3][Cat A] Target Practice

[Kai NRG]

Location: H06

Tags: Civil, Building

This is a redo of Epsilon Eta's Out of Office.

*bzzz*crrrkkkk*BANG!*

*fzzz*kkkBAAANNNGGG!*

There you are! Aren't you *BANG!* supposed to be working on the 49X RayWing blueprints?

I am. *crrkkk*BANG!*

Really? *kkkBANG!* Aren't you *fzzz*snap*BANG!* shooting?

I walk around with a library in my head. *kk*snap*BANG!* And my helmet doubles as a notepad. *fzzz* I hold a pen between my teeth.

Doesn't that *BANG!* make it hard to *kkkBANG!* talk? Speaking of which, do you *BANG!* have to *fzzz* shoot while we're *BANG!* talking? It's hard to *kkkrrrccckkk*BANG!* hear while you're banging away.

I'll switch to the KalPistol. It goes crack! instead of bang!

That *crrrrkkk*KKK!* wasn't really *brrzz*CRACK!* what I was thinking.

So picky! How's this? *szzzle*POP!*

Can't you just *POP!* take a break?

What do you want?

Right now... I would appreciate it if you would take that helmet off. It's a bit intimidating.

That's why I wear it... whatever!

So, what are you here for?

To get the 49X blueprint, of course. The Executive Board wants it.

Already? Well, warn them that I did it my style, not Octan style.

Given who they want it for... I don't think they'll care.

To be continued!

Yes, this does tie into my story!

C&C welcome! Thanks for looking!

[Vedauwoo]

Awesome...that first shot of the gun ROCKS! Very nice, sir!

[Isundir]

Awh, I have just made a squad of Kawa soldiers all with that helmet, I thought I was being so clever and unique

[woofmcmoose]

Nice re-imagining. I love the different effect of each gun, especially the gloopy bits left behind by the first one. It does look like the space time distortion has given Octan a MANTIS DeathRayBlaster^TM.

[EpsilonEta]

It does look like the space time distortion has given Octan a MANTIS DeathRayBlaster^TM.

An Octan^TM Death Spray Banger©

Ha, I like what you did with the story (and the sound effects). “I'll switch to the KalPistol. It goes crack! instead of bang! ”

And Octan persist with working on paper as well as have there target range painted in company color.

I like the stripes (but are they shooting at Kawashita targets?)

I wonder if she is one those hybrid characters that pop up (Spacer Pombe, Big Long Sally) Maybe Dr Long and Raven? That would be interesting.

Edited January 11, 2016 by EpsilonEta

[Kai NRG]

Awesome...that first shot of the gun ROCKS! Very nice, sir!

Thanks Vedauwoo!

Awh, I have just made a squad of Kawa soldiers all with that helmet, I thought I was being so clever and unique

It's a really cool hat - I bet it would go good on Kawa soldiers!

Nice re-imagining. I love the different effect of each gun, especially the gloopy bits left behind by the first one. It does look like the space time distortion has given Octan a MANTIS DeathRayBlaster^TM.

Hurray for gloopy bits! Thanks!

An Octan^TM Death Spray Banger©

Ha, I like what you did with the story (and the sound effects). “I'll switch to the KalPistol. It goes crack! instead of bang! ”

And Octan persist with working on paper as well as have there target range painted in company color.

I like the stripes (but are they shooting at Kawashita targets?)

I wonder if she is one those hybrid characters that pop up (Spacer Pombe, Big Long Sally) Maybe Dr Long and Raven? That would be interesting.

Thanks Epsilon, glad you liked it! Yes, the paper was a reference to my library build and everyone's comments about the anachronisticisity (guess that's not a word) of paper in our highly technological world... which was why I was thinking about redoing the library for category B as a super advanced holographic talking Kawa library - but I didn't get the chance to, unfortunately!

Of course they're shooting at Kawa targets!

[Andromedas Gates]

The judges awarded you 6 points.