Isundir Posted December 20, 2015 Posted December 20, 2015 (edited) Name: Hangar Bay 5 Location: E11 Tags: Civil, Building Previously Excuse me, I was told to report here? Hi, you must be Gattsu. I'm Sakura Weifu, lead scientist of Research and Development team Ypsilon. But you may call me Sakura-Chan. Yes, erhm ok. This is hangar bay 5, our temporary workshop until we get a proper lab again. Hiya Doc, I see you've brought a guest. Gattsu meet Kim Njoy, our engineer, Kim this is Gattsu our new security detail. Oh hiya, I was just fine tuning your armour. What's this, it looks amazing. Careful don't touch tha... User detected, physiology compatible, injecting Nanomites. Penatration succesful, all systems operational, congratulations for choosing the Synthetic Artificial Support System, SASS. What just happened?!? You just activated the prototype advanced combat enhancement suit F3NR1R. You say that like this is bad? I'll just take it off. You don't get it, it's injected it's Nanomites into you, you are bound now so only you can operate the suit. That's one of the most expensive pieces of equipement we brought with us, argh well it's done now. Just remember, if SASS ever asks if you want to engage Beserk mode then decline. Our test pilot died in that suit. What?!? Berserk mode, when used, it completely numbs all senses to pain, and enhances your every movement. The armor unlocks the user's muscles, allowing them to use their full strength, at the risk of permanent damage to both body and mind. It killed the test pilot so don't use it okay. Also if your starting to hear voices in your head, that's SASS, the AI program that comes with the suit. Oh great after everything not her too, hey Sunshine, what are you doing here? To be continued. (2) More Pics: Edited December 23, 2015 by Isundir Quote
EpsilonEta Posted December 20, 2015 Posted December 20, 2015 Another cool build and interesting characters. I look forward to know more about them. I write in a text editor. Not only can I save but it help with spell checking and let met write/plan stories weeks in advance. And if they really didn't want him to touch that suit they would have kept it in a sealed vault Quote
Kodan Black Posted December 20, 2015 Posted December 20, 2015 That is an awesome hangar! Great floor and nice work on making the walls interesting too! I like the Xmas tree and presents. Nice workshop feel and very Kawashita too. I'm curious to see where the story is going, hopefully he never ends up in berserk mode. Quote
mediumsnowman Posted December 20, 2015 Posted December 20, 2015 Very cool! I like the number in the floor and the texture created by placing the brick-bricks behind the cross beam panel is really cool. Nice job. Quote
EpsilonEta Posted December 20, 2015 Posted December 20, 2015 ...hopefully he never ends up in berserk mode. Have you heard of Chekhov's Gun? Quote
mediumsnowman Posted December 20, 2015 Posted December 20, 2015 Have you heard of Chekhov's Gun? Don't you mean Chekhov's Gauntlet? Quote
Isundir Posted December 21, 2015 Author Posted December 21, 2015 (edited) Cool build! Thanks Another cool build and interesting characters. I look forward to know more about them. I write in a text editor. Not only can I save but it help with spell checking and let met write/plan stories weeks in advance. And if they really didn't want him to touch that suit they would have kept it in a sealed vault Your right, and if they kept it in a vault they couldn't work on it though That is an awesome hangar! Great floor and nice work on making the walls interesting too! I like the Xmas tree and presents. Nice workshop feel and very Kawashita too. I'm curious to see where the story is going, hopefully he never ends up in berserk mode. Your right we wouldn't want him to go batsnot insane, one Pombe Eshey is enough. Very cool! I like the number in the floor and the texture created by placing the brick-bricks behind the cross beam panel is really cool. Nice job. Thanks Edited December 21, 2015 by Isundir Quote
SpacerSteve Posted December 21, 2015 Posted December 21, 2015 Great scene this week. I can't wait to see Beserk mode! Gattsu is a cool character. Quote
Bob De Quatre Posted December 23, 2015 Posted December 23, 2015 Regarding the tags, spaceships interior should have the "building" tag, and not "spaceship". Quote
Isundir Posted December 23, 2015 Author Posted December 23, 2015 Regarding the tags, spaceships interior should have the "building" tag, and not "spaceship". I see my bad, do tags really matter or are necessary if it doesn't involve my profession anyway? Quote
Bob De Quatre Posted December 23, 2015 Posted December 23, 2015 Tags will trigger your job bonus, but also any technologies bonuses Quote
Isundir Posted December 23, 2015 Author Posted December 23, 2015 Tags will trigger your job bonus, but also any technologies bonuses Ah yes of course, thank you, still learning Quote
Andromedas Gates Posted December 23, 2015 Posted December 23, 2015 The judges awarded you 5 points. Quote
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