EpsilonEta Posted November 15, 2015 Posted November 15, 2015 Location: D10 Tags: Military I'm jumping back and forth in the continuity here but here is the “conclusion” to the Dust Demon story. Raven have just found the Commodore, leader of the Dust Demons. Problem is, so have Koro and there objectives differ. Last weeks last picture: Step away from him, NOW. Battle for the Commodore Koro throws his sword. Raven dodge but lose her aim. Koro rush forward and push the gun away. It's now a unarmed battle which suits Raven better than last time. Her fighting skills and battle armor can almost compensate for Koro's enhanced strength and speed. Almost. The battle still doesn't go easy and the Commodore might get away so Raven decides to end it. What? I can't move. Yes, I activated your lock down command. My what? Lock down, a command signal to disable your body in case you attack a superior officer without permission. It's the entire third chapter of the security section of your manual. Right, the manual. You haven't even read the manual for your own body, have you? Yeah, as if you know so mush about your body. I have studied anatomy. I know how to kill, disable or repair the human body. Show off. Raven give him a slight push and then move over to the commodore. You are under arrest for crimes... You think you have won? Nothing you do will stop the Demons from rising. Com on, you are a small pirate gang, not a demonic deity. All of this would have ended weeks ago if your insider hadn't order the destruction of the Guinevere base. Ah, it's you. So I guess your name isn't Sarah then. Not so good at reading people as you thought. Oh, I am. But you where good. I give you that. Tell you what, as you are all going to die here, if you let me go I spare your life. You could even join us. We need people like you. Not interested. A pity to waste such potential. You would have been great with us. I'm great with anyone. Kawashita soldiers arrive. Raven, ma'am. We have secured the base and are ready to move out. Good. I need an escort for the prisoner and a drop ship standing by outside. Yes ma'am. What is Koro doing on the ground Learning the chain of command. Raven unlock Koro and they are starting to escort the Commodore from the station. As they walk, Raven suddenly feel something is off, then everything happens at once. The Commodore throw himself to the ground, Raven's vizor display warns for explosive material... GET DOWN!! ...a bright light and a loud noise, cluster bomb from the sound of it, pain. Dust Demon soldiers emerging. Her vision getting darker. She can barely make out Koro following the soldiers who are taking the Commodore, then black. This might have been more exiting if it happened in the right order. Now you know she end up here, but it's not as if she would have died anyway Whoo, this tock a while. I'll have to write less story and make larger builds for a while now. Only the coridor (with explosive effects) are new for this week. Quote
StarHawk3 Posted November 16, 2015 Posted November 16, 2015 Nice builds and story. I like the technic beams used in the hallway floor Quote
Orange Leader Posted November 16, 2015 Posted November 16, 2015 I second that the technic beams as a floor works great. It gives a very rough industrial atmosphere of hard metals. The story is something I'd look forward to. Quote
Andromedas Gates Posted November 20, 2015 Posted November 20, 2015 The judges awarded you 4 points. Quote
mccoyed Posted November 21, 2015 Posted November 21, 2015 "I'm great with anyone." Awesome line! Quote
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