EpsilonEta Posted October 3, 2015 Posted October 3, 2015 (edited) Location: B06 Tags: Spying Raven is finally doing the job she was hired for. The spaceships appearing in this are old and should not be judged. Dust Demon activity have been low ever since there main base blow up. There leader “the Commodore” was presumed killed in the explosion and the mold inside Kawashita was killed by Koro. But now Demons have started raiding again and Raven is sent to put a stop to it once and for all. From the hard drives Raven stole they can hack the Demons flight schedules. Important officers are about to traveling to Sorn. Raven is sent to intercept. A friendly conversation In the skies above Sorn. BHOOOM!! KRASH!!! Raven search the crashed drop ship and “rescue” two survivors. After a “friendly conversation” with one of them, a Dust Demon Officer, Raven learn that the Commodore is still alive and where there new main base is as well as a lot of other useful things. Thank you for your cooperation. A pleasure talking to you. She go over to the other one. I didn't know you where supposed to be on that ship but this is a nice little bonus. Am I supposed to know you? Well, you certainly tried for about 40 minutes. What the block are you talking about. Who are you? You don't recognize me, do you? Does his sound familiar? She changes her voice to sad and afraid. “My name is Sarah Connor, I swear. Please. Don't hurt me.” Raven can see in his frightened eyes that he now recognizes her and realize who was responsible for the destruction of the Guinevere base. She continues in her regular, calm voice. I give you 2 out of 7 for your efforts but don't feel bad. Very few get more then 4. I also got the felling you enjoyed it so I'm going to assume you're a “home schooled” little creep who like hearing people scream. ... I take that as a yes. Funny how I learned more about you then you about me that session. But then I had professional training. I was best in my class, both at taking and giving. Here, let me give you some education on how to use this thing properly. NOO, wait!! I'll tell you anything! I know you will. But to be honest, I too kind of like this. To be continued. The crash site The interrogation room Edited October 3, 2015 by EpsilonEta Quote
Vedauwoo Posted October 3, 2015 Posted October 3, 2015 (edited) Awesome crash! I love the Kawashita Ship.....Very Slave One-esque! Edited October 3, 2015 by Vedauwoo Quote
mccoyed Posted October 4, 2015 Posted October 4, 2015 (edited) Wow... didn't know Raven was the torturing type. Edited October 4, 2015 by mccoyed Quote
EpsilonEta Posted October 4, 2015 Author Posted October 4, 2015 Awesome crash! I love the Kawashita Ship.....Very Slave One-esque! Thank you! The Andrasteia was my contribution to Challenge 2 category A. Wow... didn't know Raven was the torturing type. Getting information can be done in many ways and Raven is skilled in most of them. (as well as a lot of other things) But you might not want to but to much weight in to what she says. She WAS the best in here class but that only mean that she know what to say to get the best psychological effect. Whether she enjoy it or not is left unsaid Quote
Dannylonglegs Posted October 4, 2015 Posted October 4, 2015 That crash scene is superb! Excellent job! Love the return of the torturer! Lovely job! Your story is (as always) totally awesome and feels ripped right out of an action-packed James Bond film! And also, I love the angle on your contest-entry spaceship. Mmmm. That is a lovely ship from any angle! ~Insectoid Aristocrat Quote
LittleJohn Posted October 4, 2015 Posted October 4, 2015 (edited) Excellent work! The crash site is superb and I like how you used the grill tiles in the interrogation room Edited October 4, 2015 by LittleJohn Quote
Andromedas Gates Posted October 7, 2015 Posted October 7, 2015 The judges gave you 2 out of 7 for your efforts but don't feel bad. Very few get more then 4... Ok, ok... They awarded you 4 points. Quote
EpsilonEta Posted October 7, 2015 Author Posted October 7, 2015 (edited) The judges gave you 2 out of 7 for your efforts but don't feel bad. Very few get more then 4... Ok, ok... They awarded you 4 points. Haa I didn't think about the build grading scale when I wrote that. But maybe it was an unconscious nudge to the judges for never giving me more than 4. (I know I got a 6 once but think that was to adjust my previous two 3s ) That crash scene is superb! Excellent job! Love the return of the torturer! Lovely job! Your story is (as always) totally awesome and feels ripped right out of an action-packed James Bond film! And also, I love the angle on your contest-entry spaceship. Mmmm. That is a lovely ship from any angle! ~Insectoid Aristocrat Thank you! I photographed the ship upside down (the ship was upside down, not me) to get a shot from the underside without needing to edit away the stand. Then I felt like edit away the entire background anyway. Excellent work! The crash site is superb and I like how you used the grill tiles in the interrogation room Thanks. The idea for the crash site turned out much better then I had hoped. Edited October 7, 2015 by EpsilonEta Quote
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