Pirate ship - "Revenge"

[cyryl]

36c

This is second version my new ship "Revenge". He have new, white cabin!

I really hope you will like my "Revenge" :-D

My private Gallery - Revenge - second version

Edited September 19, 2009 by SlyOwl

[El Bucanero]

Looks way better than the sloop version! It seems to me the cabin and the sails are improved?

Mr Tiber

[Barbossa]

Nicely done!

I think the stern looks much better now, and the white colour of the cabin is perfect. :'-)

[Shadows]

The sails are very nice and I like some of the detailing. A fine use of brick built cannon and the shark makes me smile for some reason.

Only thing that seems out of place is that hull. Looks like something more matched to a late 19th century steamship that still would have carried sails for reserve use.

Beyond that, I'd move the two slopes on either side of the cabin windows up one brick to cover the gap exposed by their angle (where they meet the window) and maybe angle the ladder lower (remove the 2 bricks where it meets the deck and replace them with a couple of plates placed maybe 4 studs closer to the cabin or simply have the ladder go straight down, I think it would fit perfectly and more naturally.

Overall, nice work! *y*

[Bonaparte]

This is a immense improvement over the first version.

If you manage to make the cabin look a bit more integrated, you can still improve it a bit.

I would make a white border around the deck or something like that.

But you did a great job on the masts, sails and the figure-head.

I've added a picture to your first post...

Edited August 10, 2007 by Bonaparte

[El Bucanero]

I've added a picture to your first post...

You did? How did you get the picture?

Mr Tiber

[Bonaparte]

You did? How did you get the picture?

Mr Tiber

Print Screen and paste in any graphics program (like paint) to cut the image out.

Edited August 10, 2007 by Bonaparte

[cyryl]

I've added a picture to your first post...

Thanks Mr. Bonaparte! But what do you think about my private gallery?

Link to gallery - http://www.mocgallery.republika.pl/

Edited August 10, 2007 by cyryl

[ZeekyBoogeyDoog]

The cabin is much better than the old one. Great job *y* !

[Bonaparte]

But what do you think about my private gallery?

What I think of your private gallery? wspaniały

You've got a nice collection of MOCs.

I also like your space MOCs.

You should post those in our space section.

Or maybe you already did?

Edited August 10, 2007 by Bonaparte

[cyryl]

What I think of your private gallery? wspaniały

Thanks :-D :-D But no "wspaniały" however "wspaniała"!

Edited August 10, 2007 by cyryl

[Bonaparte]

Thanks :-D :-D But no "wspaniały" however "wspaniała"!

My Polish is a bit rusty ;-) .

I hope i didn't say anything insulting :-D

[SirNadroj]

Great use of that hull! *y*

[cyryl]

I hope i didn't say anything insulting :-D

No, you write other genus:

Wspaniały - mannish

Wspaniała - feminine

[Capn Frank]

Print Screen and paste in any graphics program (like paint) to cut the image out.

Thanx B *y*

I was able to add this ship to the Index of MOC Ships *y*

Cyryl,

Your capatain's cabin skills are improving *y*

Good job *y*

P

[cyryl]

Thanks all! *sweet*

[cyryl]

*wub* Third (and last) :-D Version is coming!