Oky Posted November 22, 2008 Vote for Traitor: Adam. Make that two votes for Adam! It was him who sabotaged our cruiser, and it was him who gave us the blueprints, so it would definitely fit. What do you say, Adam? Good call on the fake time machine, Oky Wan. Thanks. Good call letting the droid find the machine. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Adam Posted November 22, 2008 Well, I wouldn't mind being a traitor, but there are a few issues with it. For instance, on Hoth, Thok said that there was a traitor among us moments after he met me. I think it's sorta unlikely that I'd be the traitor. Also, when I messed with the ship, I was supposed to go down and finish the dark haired Jedi storyline, but I had to leave on short notice, and that couldn't happen. I think more likely traitors could be JD (he's a storm trooper from the future, remember?) or Garviel- he seems a little shady, with his Sith lightning and all that. But he did fight agains Bequin and all of that... Well, if you want me to be a traitor, that's fine with me! I just think that you should consider all of the possibilities. But if I was the traitor, I could easily tie things up. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pr0visorak Posted November 22, 2008 (edited) Looks like we have a traitor in our mists! :pir-skull: I realy dont want to vote though, you guys can decide. I do not want to take place in this mansluaghter Edited November 23, 2008 by pr0visorak Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
simonjedi Posted November 22, 2008 Garviel- he seems a little shady, with his Sith lightning and all that. But he did fight agains Bequin and all of that... That was a side effect of teleporting through time, besides if I was a traitor I would be a completely useless one considering whats blown up, i could be a double double agent :P but i don't mind being a traitor if it gets the story somewhere. Thok said that there was a traitor among us moments after he met me. I think it's sorta unlikely that I'd be the traitor I put that down to you being new and the group not trusting you yet, than you being a traitor. Also who says the traitor is still alive? MacK could have been and redeemed himself at the end of C3. I'll leave it up to you all Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
-JD- Posted November 22, 2008 (edited) Don't make me the traitor! I'm good! I FOUGHT THE EMPIRE!!!! JD(f): Wait a second....WHAT THE HELL AM I DOING HERE! Adam: What?! JD(f): ME! Adam: Huh? JD: HIM!!!! Adam: Well, technically, he is the present JD. JD(p): Who's the angry guy shouting and pointing at me? Jim: Well...he's- JD: HEY! DON'T SAY!!!!! Jim: Why? JD(f): THIS SHOULD NEVER HAVE HAPPENED! DON'T YOU KNOW? Jim:No. JD(f): oh great. Jim: Huh? JD(f): I've been having visions of things that never happened. The hunter is from the future and he never should have come throught to this timeline! It never happened to me! JD(p): HOW do you know about him?! JD(f): Shut up you! There are time machine duplicates! Gizor Delso hired the hunter, in the future where I came from, to kill me. He attacked the wrong guy! Delso is another nemisis of mine so they worked together. WE MUST MINDWIPE.....HIM! JD(p): What!? ME!? Jim: Oh dear.... There was a pause as the gang realised what had happened. Then more magna guards arrived. Edited November 22, 2008 by Jammiedodger714 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bob Posted November 22, 2008 Bob and his battalion of clones marched through the forest. Something had shot them down. A huge weapon obviously in control by the CIS. Commander: What do you think that was Sir? Bob: Most likely it was a magnapulse cannon...but Im not exactly sure. Commander: The Other ships "Can't repel firepower of that magnitude!" Bob: I'd say then "It's a Trap!" for the other ships. Clone45: Sir! Look up ahead! Its a bunker. True enough a small bunker was up ahead...It didn't look Republic. Bob: Let's mark this location, for now we have to regroup with the others in the clearing. Clone3: Yes Sir. Soon enough, the rest of the troops that evacuated met in a huge clearing. There were at least 600 Clones there, and about 2 At Te's that got out with the Gunships. Bob: On the way here, we spotted a small bunker! We have to take it to support our forces All Clones: YES SIR! Bob: Good luck to us then! Let's go. And so, unknowingly who was inside the bunker, the clones marched off. I hope your all still in the bunker, and not elsewhere, or else my post meant nothing. Woe is me! I need a new Flagship Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JimBee Posted November 23, 2008 Yeah, I still think it should be Adam. By the way, JD, I have no idea what you're talking about in your post... This is too easy. Butcher thought, The CIS wouldn't leave their fate to a few weak magnaguards... Unless... "Hehe... say goodbye, Republic scum... *mechanical laugh, coughs*)" said a familiar voice. To everyone's horror, they knew who it was. The magnaguards paused. "You can kill us, Greivous, but you can't escape. We have whole regiments of clones on and above the planet, ready to exterminate you" said Butcher. He was surprised he had the courage to do so. Grievous was nowhere in sight, however. "Hehe, so you think". "You're making a mistake, Grievous," said Oky Wan. "Using the time machine could destroy the whole universe, and everything in it, including you". "Don't be too sure. We've figured out every little detail, and we have certain specimens who can pull off the job, which I'm sure you've already figured out. But it doesn't matter, you're all about to die, and I'll be safely off this planet by the time you are. You scum have only been a thorn in my side for too long, but nothing more. The plans will proceed perfectly, and there's nothing you can do about it". Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
-JD- Posted November 23, 2008 The future JD sees his present self, so he reacts. then we beat up magna guards. I was following on from pr0s post. GG: YOU!!! JD(both): Oh no! Hey...WHAT??? Stop copying me! GG: Now there is two. All the more pleasure for me! The communication ended. Jim: We didn't turn the cameras off! He knows where we are. Oky: Get ready! GG: Too late! *cough cough* The gang turned. GG leapt from out the darkness at the present JD. He grabbed his throat. Both JDs gasped for air. The future JD collapsed. GG: Long time....no see! GARRRR! He threw JD(p) into the wall. JD fell to the floor and GG ignited his sabers. GG: This is the end for you my friend! JD has too many enemies. He destroyed a super weapon of GG's and they fought. JD won by blasting GG's right arm. As you can see, the visions the future JD had are coming true. Will people die? Only time will tell! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Adam Posted November 23, 2008 Okay, I'm the traitor- but under one condition: the dark haired Jedi has been controlling me ever since I fiddled with the controls on the ship (nearing Felucia). You (or I) can find some way to kill him off and get the regular Adam back before the chapter ends. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Oky Posted November 24, 2008 (edited) As you can see, the visions the future JD had are coming true. Will people die? Perhaps... But not yet! GG was about to strike JD down with his saber, when suddenly the wall behind them exploded. Several clones came running in, and once their commander had spotted Grievous, he told his men to open fire on the droid general. The cones obeyed, and soon enough, Grievous found himself under a rain of blaster fire. Having no choice, the general fled. As soon as GG was out of sight and the clones stopped shooting, the commander took his helmet off and said: "Hi! My name is Bob. I thought someone might need my help in this facility, but the entrance was too heavily guarded, so we decided to create our own entrance!" "That was perfect timing, commander" said future JD who was recovering, now that his present self wasn't in danger anymore. "Right," said Jim, "now let's follow Grievous. He should lead us right to the real time machine! Commander Bob, follow us with some of your men. We can use some help." "No problem" replied Bob. They all moved toward the exit that Grievous had rushed out of a minute ago, but all of a sudden, Adam turned around and ignited his lightsaber. He had an absent, but determined look in his eyes. He said: "I'm afraid I can't let you leave." "Adam... What's going on?" Jim said confused. Then, a figure emerged from a dark corner of the room. It was the dark jedi. It all made sense now: Adam was the traitor among them, and he had been controlled by that dark-haired jedi ever since they got near Felucia. DUN DUN DUUUUN! Edited November 24, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bob Posted November 24, 2008 Bob: Sir, Im afraid im going to have to ask you to move... Oky: It's no use...He's the Dark Jedi! (Collective Gasp) Clone: Sir! Orders? Bob: Anyone? Orders? No? Okay...You five, circle that jedi and take him out. The Clones circled around while the others stayed back with the others. Suddenly Adam and the other Dark Jedi attacked and circled around the clones, slicing through their armor. They all fell Clone Captain: Butch! Fire! All forces open fir- Bob: No captain! They'll just deflect it and fire it back It had become the ultimate stand off.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JimBee Posted November 24, 2008 (edited) "Adam..." said Butcher hopelessly. He knew Adam the Dark Jedi wasn't Adam. "You all came here just to die," replied the Dark Jedi. "And there's no way that you can win. Two of us versus some pathetic civilian reconnaissance group is just about a unfair as it gets". Butcher ignited his lightsaber. He had no choice but to fight them. Suddenly, 'Adam' charged. Jim quickly took out his nail gun and shot at him, but missed. Garviel used his lightning, but it was deflected back at him, and he was burned. Butcher was knocked to the ground. Everyone took put their blasters and shot at Adam and Benquin, but the shots were deflected, and several clones were hit, as well a member or two of the group. Adam spun around and lashed out at Butcher, but he blocked it. The two had engaged in a duel... Boring pics, I know. I used Agent Chases head just this time to fit with Adam's yellow head, but I'm still using Indy's for my character's regular head. Edited November 26, 2008 by JimButcher Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Oky Posted November 24, 2008 (edited) (...) Garviel used his lightning, but it was deflected back at him, and he was burned. Butcher was knocked to the ground. Everyone took put their blasters and shot at Adam and Benquin, ... I think simonjedi said that the force lightning was a temporary thing and that he doesn't have that power anymore. Also, this is not Beqin. It's the dark-haired dude that came out of Adam's body (or something) during the last chapter. And she is spelled "Beqin", not "Benquin". What ever happened to her anyway? Could she be lurking around the facility, ready to attack us, as well? Or did she die when MacK destroyed the separatist cruiser? She was in that hangar at the time after all. But then again, Grievous escaped too, so... Edited November 24, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pr0visorak Posted November 24, 2008 (edited) Wow! This is going to be interesting! Butcher was fighting with Adam when the dark jedi suddenly jumped in and pushed Butcher to the ground. Bob:"Clones concentrate all fire power on that jedi!" The remaining clones fired and the dark jedi jumped away, Butcher got on his feet and went in pursuit. pr0:"Adam, why?" Adam:"You don't nned to know why! Just know that you are about to die!" Adam jumped towards pr0, but he jumped away in the nick of time away from the dark jedi's lightsaber. pr0:"I might have lost to you before! But I wont now!" Adam:"You sure about that?" pr0:"No, but looks like I have to try!" YAAAAAA! Pics soon Edited November 24, 2008 by pr0visorak Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Oky Posted November 24, 2008 (edited) Also, this is not Beqin. It's the dark-haired dude that came out of Adam's body (or something) during the last chapter. And she is spelled "Beqin", not "Benquin". Butcher was fighting with Adam when Benquin suddenly jumped in and pushed Butcher to the ground. Didn't you read what I posted? Pics of this soon! YAAAAAA! Pics soon Less talk, more pics! As pr0 and Adam battled on, Butcher was engaged in a duel with the dark jedi. Getting frustrated, Jim decided to shed some light on this man's intentions. He asked: "Who are you? What do you want from us?" The jedi smirked and began to explain: "My name is Ragnakk Vohr. I used to be a Jedi, but my soul got trapped inside a statue by a powerful Sith ages ago. While I rested inside that statue for all these years, I have come to realize who the really powerful beings in this world are - the Sith! I had sworn to become one would I ever get out of that statue. As the years past by, I taught myself the power of telepathy, and once your foolish friend Adam here came by my statue one day, I was able to convince him to let me use his body as a new host body. I tried to gain control over it, but I never completely succeeded - until recently! And when Adam got flung into the future shortly thereafter, our minds and bodies somehow became two separate persons. I was myself again at last and was able to pursue my dream of becoming a Sith! However, I had to find out that the Sith got extinct to the point where there are always only two of them! I thought I was never going to become a Sith, but then I remembered something I had overheard when I was still in Adam's body: These separatists have a time machine that I could use to go back to a time where Sith were plentiful and powerful, and become one of them! I could even avenge them by altering the timeline so that the Jedi end up as the extinct race! That's why I have come here, and the only thing that stands in my way now is you and your gang of wannabe heroes!" Great, Jim thought. Looks like we don't have a choice. We have to eliminate him in order to lift his mind control off of Adam and to prevent him from messing with the time machine. There. Now the dark jedi has a name and has given us a supervillain-style monologue about his evil plan. Edited November 24, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pr0visorak Posted November 24, 2008 (edited) Didn't you read what I posted? Less talk, more pics! As pr0 and Adam battled on, Butcher was engaged in a duel with the dark jedi. Getting frustrated, Jim decided to shed some light on this man's intentions. He asked: "Who are you? What do you want from us?" The jedi smirked and began to explain: "My name is Ragnakk Vohr. I used to be a Jedi, but my soul got trapped inside a statue by a powerful Sith ages ago. While I rested inside that statue for all these years, I have come to realize who the really powerful beings in this world are - the Sith! I had sworn to become one would I ever get out of that statue. As the years past by, I taught myself the power of telepathy, and once your foolish friend Adam here came by my statue one day, I was able to convince him to let me use his body as a new host body. I tried to gain control over it, but I never completely succeeded - until recently! And when Adam got flung into the future shortly thereafter, our minds and bodies somehow became two separate persons. I was myself again at last and was able to pursue my dream of becoming a Sith! However, I had to find out that the Sith got extinct to the point where there are always only two of them! I thought I was never going to become a Sith, but then I remembered something I had overheard when I was still in Adam's body: These separatists have a time machine that I could use to go back to a time where Sith were plentiful and powerful, and become one of them! I could even avenge them by altering the timeline so that the Jedi end up as the extinct race! That's why I have come here, and the only thing that stands in my way now is you and your gang of wannabe heroes!" I know but since Jim wrote it I just continued, I can change it now if you want? Sorry but Jim when are you going to update the front page that Skipper is dead? Also, congrats again Oky for your promotion to count Edited November 24, 2008 by pr0visorak Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Adam Posted November 24, 2008 (edited) I'm sorry I haven't posted lately- it's been busy for real world Adam. Rest assured, I'll have some story and pics up soon (I know, less talkin' more.... picture-takin'!). Edited November 24, 2008 by Adam Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pr0visorak Posted November 24, 2008 (edited) I'm sorry I haven't posted lately- it's been busy for real world Adam. Rest assured, I'll have some story and pics up soon (I know, less talkin' more.... picture-takin'!). Why is your Im sorry not colored? I know, he told me the same thing too :pir-skull: Edited November 24, 2008 by pr0visorak Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
-JD- Posted November 24, 2008 (edited) JD(f) had taken a shot to the arm. Adam got a quick glance at JD and he smiled. Adam: Go on JD. Tell them what you did. JD(p): YOU! You're...me?! JD(f): Yes. I am. Except I'm the older and sexier version.( ) JD(f) got out his stun and mind wipe gun and shot JD(p), who fell unconcious. pr0: What does he mean JD? What did you do? JD(f): You will never know. Adam: He betrayed you all! Oky: What?! Uh oh! JD was under the dark jedi's control as well! JD: He offered me so much...I could not resist. Oky: Thats not you talking! Its the dark jedi! JD picked up his chaingun. He pointed it at Oky. JD: She meant so much to me. Oky: Whos 'she'? JD: The one person I have ever loved. She was killed...by the empire....he promised he would bring her back! Oky: HE LIED ABOUT WHAT HE SAID!!!! JD: I never thought I would do this. BDAM BDAM BDAM! Oky dodged the bolts, and tackled JD. There was a scuffle. Edited November 24, 2008 by Jammiedodger714 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Adam Posted November 24, 2008 (edited) Err... just so you all know, I'm not REALLY evil. It's been the dark Jedi that was evil and making me evil- once he's gone, I'm back to good. Sorry about the coloring thingy- my computer sucks. EDIT: BTW, JD, it's not "more sexier" but just "sexier." Edited November 24, 2008 by Adam Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
-JD- Posted November 24, 2008 (edited) Err... just so you all know, I'm not REALLY evil. It's been the dark Jedi that was evil and making me evil- once he's gone, I'm back to good. Sorry about the coloring thingy- my computer sucks.EDIT: BTW, JD, it's not "more sexier" but just "sexier." Same here! Well....kinda. Yeh. I'll edit that. Edited November 24, 2008 by Jammiedodger714 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wouwie Posted November 24, 2008 Wouwie: ''Clones! Don't stop firing at the dark Jedi! He must be stopped!'' Clones: ''Copy that!'' The clones started firing again and the Jedi got hit in it's arm. Clone Captain: ''Take that, you (insert bad word here)!'' Oky: ''Don't be happy to early! He's still alive!'' Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Oky Posted November 24, 2008 (edited) The dark Jedi cried: "ENOUGH!" He force-pushed Jim away from him and made a motion with his hand toward the others. Suddenly, all their weapons flew into the air and out of reach. Oky Wan managed to pin JD down on the floor, and for a moment, there was no fighting. Ragnakk Vohr said: "Adam, kill your friends! I command you!" But Adam just stood there, twitching. Obviously, the real, good Adam was struggling against the evil man's mind control. Vohr grabbed Garviel, the one who was closest to him and held his lightsaber at his throat. "Kill them, or I will do it!" Adam still didn't move. Vohr stretched his arm and was about to cut Garviel's head off, when suddenly a lightsaber blade pierced through his chest from behind! He dropped Garviel and fell to the floor, dead. As he fell, his murderer was revealed: it was Beqin! "Aside, you foolish amateur" she told the dead Ragnakk Vohr. "Let a real Sith apprentice handle this! Besides, Loken is my kill!" Uh-oh! Well, at least there are no traitors anymore. Yay! So, simonjedi, it's time to finish your business with Beqin once and for all. :pir-skull: Edited November 24, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Adam Posted November 24, 2008 Once Beqin's lightsber blade had killed Vohr once and for all, the real, good Adam's vision flooded back to him, though it was of little use- he could feel himself quickly passing out. He caught a glimpse of JD falling to the ground (obviously for the same reason), his friends engaged in a battle with Beqin, Ragnakk's blood seeping onto the floor as he slowly faded away... Adam came back to his senses with a jolt. He was standing in the same spot, and barely a second had passed. And he did not like the way Beqin's lightsaber was at Loken's throat. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pr0visorak Posted November 25, 2008 Woah! Man, next I better make pics faster...Anyway lets continue! JD regained his senses after the dark jedi died... Bequin:"Nobody move or the weakling dies!" The clones aimed their weapons at Bequin and made sure they did not make a mistake. Adam returned to hos senses and on his lightsaber. Jim:"Glad to see you back to your senses again!" Adam:"Would not have it any other way!" Bequin:"A reunion! How nice but your friend is going to die anyway!" Suddenly a blue lightsaber appeared from behind,aiming at Bequin's throat. pr0:"Thats it! You are under arrest by the galactic council!" Bequin:"You! You are just a plain commando! You have no power in the force of any sort!" pr0:"Maybe...Let him go or die!" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
