The Star Wars Comic Game-Season One

[pr0visorak]

Ok! Thanks for the update simonjedi!

A few minutes before it happened...

"So, this is te transmission you recieved?"

"Affirmitive Adam. This message was sent o bequin as you can see."

"Well, did you get this or did you find this?"

"Well pr0, I just recieved it a few minutes before you arrived. All messages coming and going, they all go through here. This is very recent."

"Right well, Bequin has not recieved it yet right?"

"Yes pr0. Bequin has no clue since we destroyed the outpost."

"Good than, once he fails we might just be able to lure dooku from his hiding place."

"Good plan pr0! All we need to do now is find Bequin!"

"Thank you commander Garviel! Now we need a clue to lure him, any ideas..."

"Sir! We have a target approaching!"

"Maybe pr0 we dont need to find him, he may have come to us! Right,, clones secure positions as before and prepare to on the detonators under the soil on my mark!"

"Yes sir!"

"Adam and I will stay here and watch, do you want to stay here too pr0?"

"No thanks, I will help the troops."

pr0 went down to assist them in detaining the stranger.

"Strange kid Adam, he is hiding something."

"You have no idea!"

[simonjedi]

can you edit your post to show who's saying what?

e.g

garviel: blah blah blah

Because i think i say something but not what it was.

Also bequin has recieved the message from dooku,

[Da Death Star!]

Suddenly,Will burst into the room that Garviel was in."Sorry to burst in like this,Garviel,but I think you should come look at this"Will blurted out.Then he spun around and started jogging towards the control room.When they got there,Will pointed at one of the computers,where there was a giant group of red blips.Just then,a Clone came hurtling into the room,shouting that there was two MTTs,at least three hundred battle droids,one hundred super battle droids,fifty droideka's,and twenty STAPs(With droids not from the other three hundred,according to the Clone)coming right for them."Thats a small army!"Will exclaimed."Even with the help of a Jedi and some kind of Clone Commando,we can't take on that kind of battle force"he added.Then a Clone said(In a very determined voice)"Well. . . . .We've got to try!"The Clone slammed his fist into his palm.Will pulled his blaster out of its holster.With a sigh,he said"I suppose your right".Then he unsheathed his Vibrosword.

[JimBee]

Nobody is general in this game, but the clones and soldiers do listen to our characters without question. Also, pr0, could you please try to avoid putting your name in every sentence, and instead, use dialogue for the characters involved. Thanks, your posts will be much easier to read once you do this.

[Bob]

I thought only the Jedi were Generals anyway. I'M not really a Commander either, I have a Jedi Knight and a small squad that I mostly lead into battle. I also command a Ventator Ship which is normal size. I suppose I am a commander then...but not a General.

The gunship descended into atmosphere,

"I can't see to much, this blasted planet..." The pilot said.

"Just guide us in to the best of your capability" Bob responded.

"Whats our plan sir?" The clone known as Blast asked.

"We need to regroup and protect those survivors that landed. We will provide fighter, gunship, and ground support. These guys have to survive. Do you understand? Bob said

"Yes Sir." all the clones responded.

"Red Light" The pilot said.

The gunship landed a couple of feet away from the communications tower.

"Green Light, Go!" said the pilot.

"Go Go Go!" a clone said.

A clone on the ground said then:

"Clones, Identify yourselves immediately!"

"We are ground reinforcements from the Republic Attack Ship, Glorious." Bob said to the clones.

"Ah, Yes Sir. Welcome to Felucia." A clone responded.

"Hope you enjoy your stay" A clone said sarcastically

"We'll try" Al the Jedi said.

[Oky]

As Jim, Thok, and Oky Wan neared the communications center, a Republic Gunship suddenly flew over their heads and landed next to the center up ahead. "Good" said Jim, "looks like the reinforcements are here!" "But only one gunship?" asked Thok. "Wont we need more than..." "Psst!" shushed Oky Wan. "What's that noise?" "What noise?" asked Jim. "That humming noise... It almost sounds like..."

In that moment, the oversized plants behind them burst aside and a large MTT soared right toward them. "Get down!" cried Oky Wan and pulled the other two onto the ground. They lay there with their faces in the dirt while the MTT passed over them. After it was gone, they remained hidden in the grass, but they looked up to see what was going on. To their shock, it was an entire small droid army that passed them!

Thok turned to Jim and said in a highly sarcastic voice: "Yeah, now I'm sure that we need more reinforcements!"

Yes, I built all of this just for this game!

Nah, of course I didn't make this! It's just another BS find. Isn't it amazing, though? Click here to see the complete gallery with many more awesome SW dioramas!

Btw, what do you think about the two quotes I have added to my sig?

Edited November 3, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi

[Bob]

"Sorry about only one gunship" Bob said to the troops.

" I could only take a few troops. There is:

One empty gunship

One Jedi

2 Commando Units

5 Regular Phase 2 Clones

3 Phase 1 Clones

1 Clone Commander

1 Bob

That's all we could spare." Bob read off the list.

"We should probably take up defensive positions. If we set up some of the turrets that I brought down, we will have a better chance of ripping up their battle ranks. And establish communications to those survivors!" Bob said.

The comlink was brought on.

"Are you sure you can't bring down another gunship?" Thok asked over a comlink.

"I could send the order in...but most of our ship is fighting in space. All we can do is take up positions." Bob responded.

"Alright, you men take up those positions behind there, Sniper Squad, take to...." The commander rambled on about there protective areas.

Bob was away from the group,

"Yes, send down as many reinforcements as you can." Bob said on a holodisk to the commander in space.

"But, you have the best troopers down there." He said.

"I know, but just get to it and fast."

"Here's hoping that they pass us..." A clone said.

Edited November 3, 2008 by Bob the Construction Man

[Oky]

Wait - are you talking with Thok over a comlink or something? 'Cause as you know, he is with me and Jim behind enemy lines! Or is this a different Thok?

[Bob]

Oh...I thought I landed nearby you. I guess ill edit it to say over a comlink. misinterpretation I guess. I know I landed nearby the Communications outpost, I just thought that you were at the outpost to...

Edited November 3, 2008 by Bob the Construction Man

[Lt. Col. Thok]

Thok shook his head. Never in all his five years in battle had he seen such a large force against one so little. It was unfortunate that he would be part of the side of the little guys, but...so it is.

Thok to Commander: Are you positive you can't just "bring the rain"? (If you haven't seen Transformers the movie, it means a firebombing) We could sure use the clear ground.

Commander to Thok: Negative, Sir. We just don't have the manpower-

Thok to Commander: Of course this army doesn't have the bloody manpower! In all my years...*goes into rant bout the current state of affairs in the army*

Oky to Thok: Calm down there, Colonel! No need to blow an artery now!

Jim to Thok: He's right, Thok. *To Commander* Those turrets will do just fine commander. Now hurry!

I'll be away for a bit in the Witch Hunt Mafia thread.

[Oky]

"But wont we get caught in the fire too?" asked Oky Wan concerned. "Nah, we're too far behind them now." said Jim.

"So... What do we do now? Just wait 'til they do the work for us?" said Thok frustratedly. Oky Wan replied: "Well, I was thinking that since we are behind enemy lines without the enemy knowing about it, we could use this opportunity to do some sabotaging!" "Hm. And what did you have in mind exactly?" asked Thok, now a little more curious. "Well, if we could get into one of the tanks or even an MTT, we could use its weaponry to take out every droid in sight!" "Now that's more like it!" said Thok satisfied. And so they started planning their attack...

This is my favorite strategy in SW: Battlefront - sneak behind enemy lines and then use their big guns against them!

[Da Death Star!]

Will took a pair of electrobinoculars from a Clone and looked through them."There are people down there!"Will exclaimed with shock."What?"Garviel questioned.Then a Troop ran up."A gunship just landed near here"The Clone paused."Should we contact it?""That would be a VERY good idea,we're going to need every damn troop we can muster"Then Will started heading to the communications room.Three minutes later,Will grabbed the commlink."This is William Jones.Myself,Garviel Loken,a Clone Commando,a Jedi,and half a dozen Clone Troopers are currently occupying this droid outpost.We are about to be attacked by a small army of droids,and help would be greatly appreciated.".

Heres hoping we don't get blasted to kingdom come by those bloody clankers.

Edited November 4, 2008 by Da Death Star!

[pr0visorak]

pr0 walked out of the room and slowly approached the stranger,they looked at each other eye to eye. Two other troopers were behind pr0 aiming their guns at the stranger making sure he did not make any sudden move.

pr0:"Who are you?"

Stranger:" I am JD."

pr0:"Yes, I am pr0! Now lets get back to the questioning. State your reason here."

JD:"I have just returned from a mission when I saw this droid outpost."

pr0:"Right, clone comlink the commander Garviel and Adam and tell them do they know anyone of the name of JD?"

Clone:"Yes sir!"

The clone tapped his helmet and spoke. pr0 and JD waited for a response.

Clone:"Sir,they both know him sir. They also want you to take note that there is a full battalion of droids coming towards this base."

pr0:"Right. JD welcome get up there and meet the commander. Clones use all our remaining demolitions and put it on the ground. That includes mines and remote bomb packs. Get all our rocket ammo and tell the troops to fire when ready. Make sure no one gets out of that outpost which means no one gets out of there including you. Quickly lay out the bombs and get in there!"

Clone:"Yes sir!"

pr0 dashed upstairs and noticed that they looked a bit worried.

pr0:"Benquin founf out didn't he?"

Adam and Garviel both nodded their heads.

pr0:"Right than, are we able to get any troops from above?"

Adam:"No, it seems that we are losing the battle up there. We need reinforcements."

pr0 kept quiet, will came in and explained that they had asked a nearby ship to get reinforcements.

Garviel:"We have to protect all the information here. It can be very useful to the republic."

pr0:"Right, I will go and see wether the troops are prepared."

pr0 walked away from the room and thought about it. Should he call in for his ships or not. He thought and pondered untill the sound of the crashing of plants came and he knew that this might be the begginning of the end.

Meanwhile...

Commander:" Are the other ships ready for engagement?"

Clone:"Yes sir!"

Commander:"Great! Now all we need to do is wait for pr0's signal."

Clone:"Sir, what if he is already dead?"

Commander:"That clone is something we will never know."

Sorry for the mistakes guys. I will correct it!

[-JD-]

JD knew what was going to happen, and it wasn't good. He remembered the droids try to destroy a base around were they were right now.

(Post edited. Sorry!)

Edited November 6, 2008 by Jammiedodger714

[Oky]

JD knew what was going to happen, and it wasn't good.

PS: GO OBAMA!

Alright, everyone, this is what we call a pointless post. Single sentences that hardly add anything to the story and election propaganda that doesn't even have anything to do with this game at all are not welcome here. So, please refrain from making such posts in the future and only post when you really have something to say that deals with this game. Thank you.

Signed,

the SWCG Co-Leader.

PS: Nice job on the new ad for this game, JD! Is that KimT I spot in the background? And that thing behind Thok, is that supposed to be BPac? If not, where is he? Who's the one in the black helmet? Also, where are Bob, Wouwie, Skipper and William "Da Death Star" Jones? Perhaps they could be added?

Way to put you and the other players into the foreground and the actual leaders in the back! Oh well, this way we have a better eye on all of you!

However, that pic is way too big for your (or anyone's) sig, so please consider resizing!

Edited November 6, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi

[JimBee]

Thanks, Oky Wan. JD, not only is discussing random things like that inappropriate here, it could get you in trouble with the real staff. I know I'm not an admin, but please refrain from posting such things, at least in the comic game.

Oky Wan, it's cool that you're using other peoples creations (and giving credit to them), but you might get in trouble with those sites (particularly Flickr) for using other people's pics. Just a bit of advice from me.

"Okay, there is no way I'm getting that hunk of junk!" complained Butcher. He didn't like slow moving vehicles.

"Well, you really don't have a choice," replied Oky Wan, with a grin tugging at his lips. "You can either come with us, or sit here and die".

Butcher sighed. Whatever it was, the Republic we weren't paying him enough.

"Fine" he sighed.

The group then began to sprint, catching up with the Trade Federation vehicle. Thok took out his blasters, and started shooting at the back doors. Oky Wan climbed onto the side, starting to dismantle a plate of steel so he could get in, and Butcher jumped on top of the back section, and took out his lightsaber for the first time in a long while.

The best was that the droids didn't even notice, besides the ones in the MTT. Oky Wan successfully removed the plate, and hopped inside. The back door also fell open due to Thok's firepower. They scrambled in, and started to blast every droid in sight, which was only a few droids. The rest were in the cockpit or in the storage area, shut down until they would be deployed for battle.

When the droids were finished, Thok and Oky Wan headed to the cockpit, ready to annihilate the pilots. But when the climbed the small service latter and opened the hatch, Jim looked down on them with a grin on his face.

"Too late" he said, and helped his comrades up.

"Okay, you guys handle the tank, while I defend on the roof" Butcher said.

"What do you mean," said Oky Wan. "It's safer in here".

"Nah, I got a few surprises, remember?"

Soon, Oky Wan was familiarized with the contols and Thok with the guns.

"Fire!!" they all yelled.

Thok opened fire on everything in front of the tank, right after Butcher threw the grenades. There was quite an explosion, and several vehicles and many battle droids were flung into the air. Butcher ignited his lightsaber as the droids began to take notice. Most of them turned around, but the front lines were preoccupied by the group of clones raising all hell. Jim deflected the droids' shots back at them at the MTT moved slowly forward, running over anything that it didn't shoot.

Several droids with jetpacks alighted onto the top, ready to shoot Butcher. He took out his naiul gun, and shot through four of the droids with a single shot.

As they tumbled to the ground, stuck together with the huge nail, Butcher cut down the remaining two droids with his lightsaber.

This is where the fun begins... he thought.

I'll try to add pics to this post soon.

Edited November 7, 2008 by JimButcher

[Da Death Star!]

Will was surprised to see one of the droids MTTs start to blast at the other droids.Then he spotted a figure wielding a Blue Lightsaber on top of the giant tank.Will pulled out the Electrobinoculars that he had taken from the Clone and looked through them."It's Jim!"Will said excitedly."WHAT?!"Will heard Garviel say for the second time in a row.But Will's happiness was short-lived,for the first wave of droids had reached the base,and the other MTT had noticed the one with Jim on it."Crud!"Will cried."Have we gotten a reply from the gunship?"Will shouted at a Troop."No,sir!"The Clone answered back."Double crud!"Will sighed.Then he heard an explosion.His head jerked up and looked out the window.Where he saw a Clone retreating back into the outpost,followed by a swarm of droids."Ah,triple crud!"Will and the Clone said in unison."

This is lookin bad for us.

[pr0visorak]

Following on what Jim said, JD you cant really say go Obama or anything to do with the elections at Eurobricks as this is a place for lego. However, a thread saying who will win Obama or macain was set up in the community thread and was closed almost immediatly.

pr0:"Clone is everything in position?"

Clone:"Yes sir, the bombs have all been placed and are rady for your detonation. The last scout is running back now."

pr0 watched the scout run into the building followed by the explosion of Felucia's plants in the MTT's way. Doids started to enter the area followed by the Mtts.

Adam:"pr0, hurry up! Blow the charge already!"

pr0:"Not yet Adam, wait for the right moment to utilise its full potential."

Will:"Guys, its Butcher, Oky and Thok! They are on the top of the MTT and the other one is about to fire on them!"

pr0:"Right will, clone tell one of the rocket boys to fire on that MTT."

The clone nodded his head and got to his comlink and in a blink of an eye a rocket was seen blowing the MTT to pieces."

pr0:"Alright than, clones that are carrying any weapons containing lasers, fire immediatly!"

Lasers started to pop out and shoot everyone and everything in its way. Droids started falling and slowly moving for cover.

pr0:"Will can you try to comlink your friends and tell them to get out of that tank before we blow everything up to smithereens?"

Will:"I will try but it might take a while."

pr0:"We have limited time so hurry!"

pr0 looked at the laser fire covering the droids, he joined in by firing his blaster at hem, hoping that this fight would end.

[WhiteFang]

I know I don't really post here, but sometimes I do take a peek here and there, to enjoy viewing the small creations that you guys are building and engaging about.

However, on a side note, please respect the rules which has been laid by the game host and follow the sequence accordingly. Do not post things which are not even related to the topic itself, and clear enough some areas of interest should not be even discussed in Eurobricks. Let's forget this little small remarks and carry on with the SWCG.

Thanks.

WhiteFang

[pr0visorak]

Thanks for the information whitefang! Oh yeah sorry for double posting but I just finished my pics. By the way, the pictures are not mine. They are from Mocpages. But they have been photoedited by me. By the way Jimbutcher, why would we get in trouble for? After all they post their pictures there to share it with everyone right. They should be mentally prepared that someone else might use their pictures. Anyway, nothing should happen to Oky as he made the pics look really good as if it were his own creation!

Will got the message through quite fast and was pleased to see Butcher, Thok and Oky leaving the MTT.

Will:"Right, pr0 this is will they have left the MTT and are making a run for it."

pr0:"Good tell them to leave immediatly and get back as far as they can behind the droids."

pr0 lookd at the battlefield and saw lasers flying everywhere, than he saw Butcher's MTT exploded with the other MTT.Suddenly, the laser firing stopped. pr0 turned around and saw the clones scarambling for ammo.

pr0:"Report clone!"

Clone:"Sir our troopers have very litle ammo left and I think we should use it for later."

pr0:"Got that, tell the demolition experts to get ready for my signal."

Clone:"Yes sir!"

The droids made their approach, the clones killed many but there were more to come.

Adam:"pr0 what are you waiting for fire!"

pr0 kept silent and waited for the right moment.

Adam:"pr0 hurry up they are going to kill us.

pr0 perspired and watched the droids approaching closely.

pr0: Slowly,slowly...

pr0:"Now!"

Fire filled the skies with the destruction of the droids as pr0 pressed the button to self destruct the detonation packs hidden below the droids. The clones fired all their missiles at the droids too. Soon the firing stopped and silence filled the air.

pr0 listened closely and the only noise that could be heard were the deactivating sounds of the destroyed droids and the remaining doids getting up and ready to pursue on.

Edited November 7, 2008 by pr0visorak

[Bob]

I already landed and im at the base..

Bob walked up to the rest of the group:

"I got those reinforcements you were asking for." He said. "Awww...its over?"

"Yep, looks like it." A clone said.

"Well here comes your help."Bob added.

Everyone looked up at the sky.

Out from space came:

2 Republic Capital Ships

3 Accamator Frigates

50 Gunships

20 ARC 170's

1 Shuttle Transport.

"That enough for ya?" Bob asked.

"Yes...I do believe it is." Everyone said together.

"Now the reinforcements arrive..." A Clone said.

A Capital Ship opened fire on the jungle about 5 miles from the base. After that, a huge explosion was seen and heard.

"Looks like the clones found the other CIS base." Someone added.

"Wonder what happened to Al... "Bob wondered

"You Burn, clone, come here."

"Yes sir?" The clone know as Burn asked.

"Get into that gunship and contact Al, if theres no response then go and look for him". Bob said.

"Yes Sir, Right away."

"I swear thats all they say..."Bob added.

Quite the plot twist on my end...

[Da Death Star!]

Uh,pr0?How could you have had enough time to plant mines when Will spotted the droids almost at the same time you & Adam got to the outpost?And what did you do about the droids that were already IN the base?

Will slumped down onto the floor.It had been a hard day,more then usual.He had almost gotten blown to kingdom come when the cruiser he was stowing away on blew up,then he almost got killed AGAIN when he got attacked dy a droid patrol(Though if Garviel and his Troops hadn't been there he would have probably died).And almost getting shot by a swarm of droids that had entered the outpost wasn't very fun either.But then he noticed a small niche in the wall.He looked through it.What he saw surprised him,for he had just found what looked to be some kind of storage room."Hey,guys!He shouted back down the hallway."I think I found something!"Will turned and looked some more."Blast it,I need to get a better view".So Will inched closer.He felt part of the floor sink in,said."Oh sh-!".And fell through the trap door.

[-JD-]

Sorry . I apologize. Don't ban me . I didn't mean any harm. I edited the post.

Again, I'm sorry.

JD

Oky Wan-

Thanks. The guy with the helmet is a member right of the SWCG? I'm confused. That is KimT, and i'll add the others soon.

Edited November 6, 2008 by Jammiedodger714

[Adam]

Yes, Jammie, you need a good spanking!

What's going on? I was away for a while and I'm clueless...

EDIT: pr0visorak, droids can't be "injured" and can't "cry out", really. They're robots! So how about we say the "discordant zaps of the malfuctioning dorids", hmmm?

Edited November 6, 2008 by Adam

[Oky]

The guy with the helmet is a member right of the SWCG? I'm confused.

I don't know, you tell me! You made the pic and chose to include him, so who is he supposed to be?

If you ask me, though, it kinda looks like Adam used to look back in Chapter 3, but it can't be him, since he is in your pic with his new look. Is that perhaps Bob with a black helmet instead of a red one?

Yes, Jammie, you need a good spanking!

pr0visorak, droids can't be "injured" and can't "cry out", really. They're robots! So how about we say the "discordant zaps of the malfunctioning droids", hmmm?

Seconded. And they can't be "killed" either, but perhaps "destroyed".